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Scene on a Pink-skied Planet 4

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I enjoyed your playfulness with the miscommunications and the use of "Spud". What a fertile imagination you have! Thanks for the spaceship illustration to set the scene as well. Smiles- Joan


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    Thank you, Joan, for the great review. Bill
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So the Potato winds thus far and perhaps is planning to take over by replicating himself into a full blown sack of spicy spuds. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


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    Thanks, MA. We'll give that guy some time to play one potato, two potato.
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Oh dear, a clone of a clone? Where the heck does it leave the rest of us? Now I am really scared. Bill. You set up the most scary scenario. .... Ulla:))


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    No fear here. This is the end of the Pink-skied saga -- for now. Thank you for reading, Ulla. Bill
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Oh, no.... not only did they not clone a conscious (impossible - lol!) but now there's gonna be more! ;) Thanx for sharing this latest episode, Bill.... I'm guessing it was caffeine and cookies this time...? :) :) Yvette


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    No fear here. This is the end of the Pink-skied saga -- for now. Thank you for reading, Yvette. Bill
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And so it goes. The population continues to dumb down and diminish in quality until it gets to you and I. We hope to improve over time, but it does not look promising does it?


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



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    I suppose the clone of a clone would be a step down. Wait! What do you mean you and I? Are we at a diminished state? Where's my cane?

reply by nomi338 on 08-Nov-2019
    Face it bub, GAME OVER!
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I wonder what potato has in mind. I look forward to finding out. Your script is well-written, very interesting. Your dialogue is realistic and your characters come to life. Nice job.


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    Thanks, MD, for the upbeat review. Bill
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Verrrry good. Loved it. Sure, he can re-clone himself as often as needed. Not too dumb for a clone. Probably smarter than Capt. Pinnacle. I like your sci fi stuff. :)


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    Thank you, Phyllis.
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This clone is interesting. So what happens if a clone is re-cloned? I'm guessing this is not the end of clone Pineapple aka Potato.

I'm assuming that you purposely switched the word order in : "leave to time." and " We will have go who decides."


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Potato talk not good. Yes. Might Potato clone himself to live longer?
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