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The Poetic Diary - Entry 20


Some of my daily thoughts in poetic form

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Cindy Warren
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It sounds like your hero is trying to get someone to take him back after a big mistake. It will probably work. Women usually do take the guy back, at least once.


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you as always for your time and review. It is greatly appreciated.
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Hey, Yang!

I got a big smile from this post. *smile* (<-- see?)

I could just picture you. Several (two? three? twenty-nine?) attempts at love and romance -- and slowly getting smarter and smarter at what you're doing... ORRRRR... at the ladies you're picking, maybe.

Either way, I'm wishing you luck. Thanks for the smile --



 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Hello Yin, Glad I can make you smile. Enjoy your day!
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This is such an uplifting poem. No imagery is necessary. Your words convey an such an honest, hopeful and positive view of self and what one can achieve even though it may take a little time. Patience is a virtue.
Thanks for sharing.
Have a wonderful weekend!


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you as always for your time and review. It is greatly appreciated.
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This poem, Enty 20, seems to be an entreaty to resume a relationship that had a rocky ending. Always show contrition and willingness to change. Once they buy that, you're back in the saddle. : )


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
    :-) lol Thanks for the review my friend and again for becoming a fan!
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Bill Pinder
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This is a good poem that appears to be asking for some more time to make a good relationship work. It does take some significant time to build healthy trust on a 2 Way St. Thanks for sharing!
Bill


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
    Thank you Mr. Bill. :-0
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