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Hi there,

Another fine and enjoyable post. Life gets complicated when we're not watching too closely! lol

Investigating Missing Persons, Unsolved Murders, and other uplifting subjects.
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Since I saw the doctor last l week, I was told I need- should that just be last week?



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    Thanks for the suggestion. I make the change tonight.
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Hi Sasha, you seem to be settling in very well. I'm glad that you have friends looking after you and taking care of you. As usual it's well written and I enjoyed. I hope you'll manage to put on some weight. Ulla:)))


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    Veronica and Agustin are awesome and I am so thankful they don't mind looking out for me.
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I think we watch the same commercials all the time as well. I do a lot of streaming so I don't have as many commercials as most. We bought an expensive pillow for my husband when we bought our mattress but the pillow gives him headaches. I guess we just need to stick with the cheapo ones. Big hugs dear. Your life may be busy for you but I'm always so glad to see you around here.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019



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    Thanks.
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Felixianous, mi amiga - I'm trying to learn a little Spanish - altho with murder topping the crime rate there, I prob. won't be traveling in that country any time soon - yet half of Mexico and C. America are pouring into our borders anyway.
Yes, it's imposible to complain about commercials - they are so busy selling even new remedies, pills, new cures, etc. The side effects of course are incredible so why would anyone take them? I ask you.
I tend to lose those little roll-y vitamins and I cannot find them - even if I sweep - hope el perro doesn't fancy them.
We keep a goodly supply of TP from Costco just in case our country fails - that's one thing, plus coffee, that is necisito par mi familia.
I wish you well and please do write about your flappy arms - you could take off in a good wind storm - and I could fly with you. This will give us all permission to write about the tire around our middle, our chins that we try to hide by wearing collared shirts, the way we creak like unoiled hinges when we get up, and so it goes. Be well amiga. usted es bien para all of us. why can't I remember how to say (all of us)? oh well, keep working.
Sra. Hurican.




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    I have lived in Mazatlan since 2006 and have never seen any violence or met anyone that has. I find it a very safe place as long as you use common sense.
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As always, I enjoyed your postings. I wonder sometimes how you get through it all. Well you do and I confess, I enjoy your posting and hope to read more. I will check you out and see what else is taking place in your world. I hope to be posting something very soon,


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    Now that I seem to have gotten my sense of humor back, I hope to be writing more Rambles. They are fun to write.
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Thank you for posting and keeping us updated on how you're doing. Here in the US of A all of our commercials want us to buy some form of medication. Maybe toilet paper would be a relief. LOL


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019



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    Funny thing is the toilet paper adds don't even offer a specific brand...LOL
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typo -- "I haven't notice(d)..."

You also used the word "primarily" three times in your first few paragraphs. Maybe an alternative would be less repetitive.

I am happy to see you posting again, but don't strain your eyes. I love that you use bold font for your readers too -- my eyes sure aren't what they used to be.


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    Thanks for catching the spag. I take a look at the use of primarily.
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I thought you did an awesome job on this journal writing. No errors that I took note of. I am the same age as you Sasha. Pills are the norm each day. So far my worst trouble is diverticulitis which keeps me home mostly. Well I'll say, like an older lady client used to say to me very often, when she was down in the dumps, "Oh, we'll make it. We'll make it! Have an amazing week! Drew xx


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019



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    I tell myself the same thing every day.
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My husband cannot bear the commercials; so, he tapes almost everything we watch on television so he can fast forward through them. He proudly says we can watch "60 Minutes" in 45 minutes! I liked your homemade dumbells and wish you well with your exercise regime. Here's to a simpler life! Smiles- Joan


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019



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    Most programs here have less commercials than in the US, but they seem so much longer with them. I don't have fast forward here, wish I did.
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Hi Sasha,
I probably would like that show about crimes too. I love all of those kind of shows, NCIS, Murder She Wrote, Diagnosis Murder, Criminal Minds.
I go in spurts when I am watching them. In 2016 I was in the hospital more than I was at home and watched a lot of Diagnosis Murder with Dick Van Dyke, and Murder She Wrote. I love those shows.

The commercials here have gotten shorter but yet they get in at least 10 commercials with in the 2 minutes they use for the commercial. It's so annoying. That's why I love MUTE! I can't imagine only having 4 commercials and having to watch them everyday. Yuck!

When you mentioned shoe size I perked up. I am like you in that I have big feet. I wear about a 12 or 13 wide. I used to get my shoes at Payless but they went out of business. So when I get shoes, I just find a company on the internet that has my size and order them. When I was in my teens and had such big feet, it was hard to get low heels. SO I would get stuck with boots or whatever shoes that had 2 inch hills. I hated those things.

I only saw one little thing and I had to check to make sure I was spelling it right. You mentioned Veronica coming over to "doll out your meds"
It is actually spelled: dole instead of doll. :) Other than that, it looked good. I was trying to find a way to make this bigger for you to see but I don't see a way to do it. Take care, Katy


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



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    I make it bigger on my end so don't worry about me being able to see it. Thanks for catching the spag.

reply by KatyM on 09-Nov-2019
    OH good glad to hear it. :) ttyl katy

reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
    Thanks for catching the spag.
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