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HI dear Ronni,
I love your evocative romantic poem. yearning for that kind of love lost to time or circumstance. Succinctly told from one verse to another. If this is biographical then I hope it can be revived. You deserve to be loved like this. Thank you for sharing this. God bless
August


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Hi dear August,
    Thanks for kind comments and appreciations on this poem,
    sincerely appreciated. Actually, this is not a lost or sad poem
    on relationship even if it comes across this way, it is an
    excerpt reminder to me...(and others who get too busy to
    give 'now' time to the important one in their life, and not
    mere hurried ( "catch you later intentions") so this is present
    tense love, so fortuned and blessed, and just a reminder
    how far too soon those 'now" moments are gone forever.
    Thanks again for your appreciations, and extra star too!!!
    Blessings always dear friend! Ronni


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I certainly hope you have a book of love poems together because this is burning up, dear Ronni. The woman with much to do is always torn to be with her lover and her heart races to be with him. As I've aged, my heart still races for my husband. I love to be in his arms. You've captured this unchained lover's heart.

Just one small improvement, if I may. Either punctuate all of this, or none of this. I see you have half and half.

Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Oh my dear Sally,
    What an encouraging HOPE dear, and gracious and
    so generously complimentarily praises and effects.
    I am so elated to hear your heart still races for your husband,
    both so fortuned and blessed indeed. Happy for you both!
    This one is reminder for one such fortune in my life
    with my 'one and only' love....lest I forget....and all the more
    happy for one in your and yours too!
    Also pardon my overdue congrats on several 'wins' posted,
    I do read them as I catch them while lessened computer time
    due to last years emergency eye surgeries, and doing fine in
    following Dr. orders till full recovery pending soon. You just
    keep going with those posts and win's...and YOUR OWN BOOK
    ON THEM TOO DEAR!
    Note: Sorry for delay in reply...got down with nasty FLU bug...
    and back on well path....
    P.S. I have been collecting such a love poems 'book'
    project, with hopeful future publication when completed.

reply by Sally Law on 24-Nov-2019
    Dear Ronni, so good to see you and I know if eye issues of the worst kind as I am blind. I send this back with prayers for a full recovery for you. I'm glad you haven't let it set you back. I am determined to finish strong with my novella, short stories and poetry, writing is pretty much my life these days. Sally xoxo
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Fascinating-mesmerizing-deliciously expresses! No time like the present to express those deeply felt emotions of love! I hope you so have this kind of beautiful live in your life that allows you to fall in love over and over again!!! xoxo


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Thank you dear Diana, for such wonderful and complimentary
    comments and appreciations on this dear! And yes, I do have
    such a beautiful love and life with my one and only keep falling
    in love with all over again....this is a diary reminder to me (and
    perhaps others) not to dismiss the 'now' times together. as too
    often we do, and those precious times are lost forever.
    Thanks too for EXTRA STAR! You are forever star friend!
    P.S. Sorry for delayed response, came down with nasty FLU bug,
    and getting back on well path again
    Blessings always, Ronni

reply by Diana L Crawford on 24-Nov-2019
    It is always my great pleasure to enjoy your beautiful writing! I?m sorry to hear you?ve been ill. It seems to be going around everywhere! I caught mine earlier in September and still fighting to get congestion completely cleared up! I got a flu shot once from the Veteran Clinic (I was in the Army when I was young) and got the flu so bad that I decided that it wasn?t worth getting any further shots. They told me that it is a dead virus immunization, but I beg to differ. So they called it an allergic reaction to the flu shot! Oh brother! I hope you are feeling stronger now and I?m thrilled to know you have someone in your life that appreciates your beautiful spirit!!! xoxo
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Hi RONNI,
What a sad poem. Yearning and reaching out to feel those moments together early on in your relationship. Sadly time and circumstances change, and the pace of life moves ever faster.
We forget to communicate and loose sight of what we once were as a couple. Sometimes people notice when it is to late. The lucky ones get to plat it all out again.
A lovely poem.
Brenda.x


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments and
    appreciations, sincerely appreciated. Actually this is not
    a past tense/event poem, rather it is a present tense one
    am blessed to have and be in. Meant as a 'reminder' to me
    (and perhaps others) not to dismiss or pass by those 'now'
    moments together, for once gone, despite good intentions.
    Sorry for the DELAYED reply, got hit with FLU bug....and getting
    back to wellness path again. Thanks again Brenda, hope
    you have a fantastic Thanksgiving!
    Best wishes, Ronni

    B



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there are so many descriptions in your poem. The image is gorgeous. Kind of makes a romantic feeling for a love poem. You should try these written verses as lyrics for a love song.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Thank you Rosemary,
    for your kind and thoughtful comments and appreciations on
    this poem! Sincerely appreciated! And thanks too for the
    tip on using these verses for love song, love the idea, and
    your encouragement to explore it. Indeed I shall!
    Gratefully with best wishes, Ronni
    P.S. Sorry for the delayed reply: Got down with nasty FLU bug...
    and gradually getting back on well path!
    Have a blessed and blissful Thanksgiving Holiday!
    Best wishes always, Ronni
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You captured this moment of bliss here in your words Ronni, time between lovers to enjoy precious togetherness is rare and stays in our memories, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Thank you dear Dolly,
    for your lovely and gracious comments and compliments on
    this dear friend! So happy you enjoyed.
    Sorry for late reply: Came down with nasty FLU bug; gradually
    getting back to wellness...
    Love, Ronni
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Amazing, isn't it? How the everyday presence of one/ones so precious to us can go unacknowledged for too long....making a bond we so very much depend on slowly weaken over time without our even realizing it! :( This is a wonderful offering, my lady, that serves as a reminder of the importance of making time for our treasured ones so that, yes, they are aware that they are still (and always will be) treasured! ;) :) Beautifully said: there are still epiphanies that still await! :) As always, thanx for sharing your gentle wisdom and warm poetic smile! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Ah dear, dear Yvette,
    So perfect your perceptions and comments on this one dear!!!
    Elated you enjoyed. And this was a diary reminder to me
    (and perhaps others to note) how precious and too fleeting
    are the 'now' times with a loved one or relationship, that can
    never be revived or be merely too hastily fleeting good intentions.
    Thus all the more thankful for my fortune and treasured one.
    Always love your gentle home spun heart warmed reflection
    sharing in your reply dear Lady Marvelous!!! Most pleasurable
    delight and appreciation of you each and every time.
    P.S. Sorry for such delayed reply: Got down with nasty FLU bug..
    and gradually getting back to wellness again...
    Gratefully with blessings always, Ronni (;) (:)
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Your last line summarizes the entire evocative poem perfectly. Yes, you must "render these chains unlocked" in order "to soar with simmering feelings yet to be unlocked"! The picture you selected sets the stage for the "Ecstacy". Cheers- Joan


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
    Thanks Joan,
    for the thoughtful comments and appreciations. Sorry for late,
    late, late, reply, got bogged down with nasty Flu bug, I rarely
    even ever get cold or flue, but there are so many new viruses out
    there now. Got meds , and just takes time to take effect.
    Take care, hope all is well with you.
    Hugs always, Ronni

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
    Thanks Joan,
    for the thoughtful comments and appreciations. Sorry for late,
    late, late, reply, got bogged down with nasty Flu bug, I rarely
    even ever get cold or flue, but there are so many new viruses out
    there now. Got meds , and just takes time to take effect.
    Take care, hope all is well with you.
    Hugs always, Ronni

reply by Joan E. on 27-Nov-2019
    Yes, all kinds of bugs are going around, and I am so sorry one caught you. Pace yourself and feel much better soon.

    We are doing a 10th annual, Thanksgiving day, train trip to San Luis Obispo tomorrow with our son. I hope you have a joyful holiday- Joan
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