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Poetic Biblical revelations


Appliying Biblical revelations to our modern world

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Bill Pinder
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Excellent job presenting this truth of Scripture which focuses on a prophetic warning about the end times, Which is good news for All of us as Christians and very bad news for those who are not. Come Lord Jesus!
Bill


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019


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You deliver a well penned narrative with the essence f the Revelations prophecies to build your case supporting Lucifer's ascendency in our time. While I feel you certainly could have made the same case in half the word usage, I knw you have a thing for being wordy. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
    Hey Monica, thanks for the read. Some might call it wordy and perhaps others call it nuanced and thorough. lol. Feel free to re -pen it and see if you catch every single nuance that I intemded to convey. Not to say that it cant be done, but I will always err on the side of getting every thought or idea conveyed that I want to convey , over sacrificing the substance for the form. In this particular write, I feel it isn't wordy enough , bringing up many " warnings" that I dldn't adequately expound upon. But it hits the Biggie's. Blessings.
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