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Beloved Star


A poem about my pet parrot.

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duchessofdrumborg
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"Beloved Star", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but I'm never given enough of them. I look forward to seeing your next post.


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much, I appreciate your review and I hope you have a good day.

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 17-Nov-2019

    Rippeltina,
    You're very welcome. I hope you have a wonderful day too.
    God bless and best wishes,
    the Duchess !(-_-)!
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brenda bickers
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Hi Rippeltina,
this is a really lovely poem. The picture had me thinking of something celestial. Isn't it amazing how pets can pull you back from the dark side of life. She sounds like she has a wonderful fun character, which is just what you need when your down. This is beautifully written and send positive vibes to the reader. I can see no snags or spags.
Well done.
Brenda.x


 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you for the lovely review, I appreciate it. :)
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Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I really like this. She sounds like an excellent family member. They're so smart too. I use to have cuckateels. They are really smart and so animated. I had a female and male that eventually had three babies. Her name was Gigi and she was the smartest thing. When I let her out, she would usually climb on my shoulder and go around to the back of my head. I have a little excess skin back there and she would grab it with her beak. I would threaten her that if she kept doing that, that I would make her into a birdie mcnugget. Thanks for sharing this well written and inspirational work. Well done!


 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you for the good review! :)
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Hi there
Thank you for sharing - I heard that parrots were great therapy pets for people with needs... now I know it for a fact. Animals ask for so little and give so much. - Lobber


 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
    I agree that pets ask for so little yet give so much love, thank you for the wonderful review.
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This poem is a very graceful dignified tribute to one's pet. There is an interaction between you and star, you describe what star gives you and what you give Starr a very humanistic style poem. Thank you for sharing


 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
    I'm glad my poem showed what you said in your review, thank you. :)
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Your poem was confusing until I read the author notes. Then it made sense. It's good to have a friend when you are down. Your poem is an excellent contest entry.


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
    Thank you for the review, I appreciate it. :)
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Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Childhood contest.
You tell us of your parrot, Star like she was a child.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much, I appreciate the wonderful review. :)
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Hitcher
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Nice, I think pets can be the light that holds young children together at times, be it a cat, dog, rabbit, lizard or bird. They can teach children to love and feel loved and if they ain't getting that at home it is Godsend.My best friend back in my childhood was my dog Shane(Alsatian). The first time my heart was broken was when he died. But I love the memories I still recall of him.


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Thank you for the review, and I believe our pets are watching us up from heaven. :)
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Marilyn Lou Berry
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I ran out of 6 stars to apply, but this poem touched me as I understand the bond that pets have with us and that they are really family members. I love how you describe, in only 1 stanza, Star's physical beauty and her endearing behavior and how your bond formed to stick forever! Touching.


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Thank you for the wonderful review. :)
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Dorothy Farrell
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Hello anon, a heart-warming poem about a childhood pet parrot that helped he writer through a period of depression. These birds can be very amusing and the writer tells a good story about her life with her parrot. Well done - good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much for the review, I appreciate it.
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