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Sharing some dirty laundry


The err of good humor

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WryWriter
 
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LOL! Thus why the public continues to hold their nose throughout this entire process. Love the photograph...flexing the political muscle too far to the left will cause an odor every time.


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019


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Hello fellow writer a wonderful Wednesday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. Good Job my friend.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019


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Hard to get some humor in only 17-syllables, and I'm guessing this Jim is a reference to help, but who is he...? ;) :) Thanx for sharing and good luck!

Old Jim saachs --> Old Jim Saachs


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
    Old gym Sox would be another spelling, wish I could use text that putsthat little mark over the' aa' sound. Let me know if that helps.


reply by Y. M. Roger on 13-Nov-2019
    It does, but I'm not sure it's gonna help you in the contest if folks don't get the 'sound' correct... :) Good luck!

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
    Thanks, I was worried about that, maybe I should change it a bit.
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