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Scene at a Seed Spitting Contest

a one scene script with Pons and Ned

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This is a well penned script which engages the reader in the contest excitement from start to finish. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thanks, MA.
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LOL! Okay -- so I had to reference up top for the first few interactions, but I think I have everyone straight now!! ;) :) Absolutely loved this one, Sir Bill, though, I do at times fear for your sanity!! ;) Certainly looking forward to the next! ;) :) Yvette


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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Yvette.
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Yuck! I can't imagine a watermelon seed spitting contest. But I can't stand the hot dog eating contests either. You've really rounded up quite a group of characters. Plan 9 is really surly. If he has such distain for Earth he should go back to where he came from immediately. Ned has at last found something he can shine out. Uncle's monkey at the end is funny. I believe I've seen Mike Rowe on TV. I don't think he's that well known. Does this mean you watch Fox TV? judi


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



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    Looked him up on line

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    I'll have to see if he's the guy I'm thinking of. judi
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This was hilariousI Plan 9 reminds me of Marvin the Martian in the Bugs Bunny cartoons, "Where's the Kaboom, there should be an earth shattering Kaboom. I'd still like to see Plan 9 and Ned go head to head. Good job.


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    Thank you, Earl. You?re right, I had Marvin in mind.
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Your script is well-written, interesting, realistic. Your dialogue brought your characters to life. The part about tying one lung behind his back was a nice touch. It showed his ego, confidence that he'd win.


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    Thank you, MD
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Very interesting scene. The lingo adds another dimension to this humorous script. Appears Plan 9 has other thoughts in mind besides a watermelon seed spitting contest, like destroying a certain "revolving orb of refuge". (BTW, good description of the earth). Well done.


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    ...and only one injury to a spectator.
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LOL! This is hilarious. I really like "America-loving" Apollo, no doubt a Ruskie spy. And Plan 9 (great movie...hahaha) makes no secret of his plans to destroy Earth. And Ned won! What a nice surprise. About time he didn't fail miserably at something! :)


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Phyllis, for the great review. Yes, Ned has beaten the vagrant, nut, alien, Pallas, and a spitting legend.
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Well, I am spit to be tied. Who knew? Looks like old Ned has a measure of talent for something after all. Ned may well prove to be someone of note after all is said and done.


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    He?s the spitting image of a hero. Thanks for reading this, nomi.
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I knew that Ned would be really good at something! Hope he gets to take home the prize as long as Plan 9 doesn't create some catastrophe. I'll assume his misspellings is due to his speech.

"(all contestents spit)" (contestants)


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Actually his is the hammer approach to chaos rather than grammar.
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I literally laughed so much, it was also well written and the picture matched perfectly. You made my day, thank you for the good read and have a good day! :)

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Rippeltina, for the great review. Bill
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