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Enough is Enough is Enough


Do not spy on me

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Rikki66
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Friends are friends even when they make mistakes.
Rikki***********************************************************************************************************************


 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    Yes, that is so true.

reply by Rikki66 on 20-Nov-2019
    Absolutely.
    Rikki

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    That is so true.
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You make yourself very clear and your points are reasonable. This is the first time I have read your writing and while your conversations can ramble a bit, the flow, and the manner in which you bring it all together makes the event easy to follow along. Thank you for sharing this story.


 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Thanks, I am pleased you liked this one.
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A cute vignette with a good outcome. It didn't even seem rambling to me.:)

I did offer one correction:

You are right, she grills Veronica and I until we say what she wants to
hear."
She grills Veronica and ME -- she doesn't grill I--she grills me


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Thanks for catching the spag.

reply by shaffer40 on 17-Nov-2019
    You're welcome. You're in good company; I frequently hear this error on TV by journalists no less.
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Your rant tels of your friends that have maybe gotten too close and overbearing out of concern.
It's kind of hard to be mad at people like that. They mean well, it just comes out wrong.
Thank you for sharing another good one.
Sharon


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Yes, I don't much care for overbearing.
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This glimpse of life there, Enough is Enough is Enough, is a bit of the push-pull of friendship that borders on hatred and disgust.


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    There is no push or pull between Linda and me, I never spoke to her about this. I felt it was best to not bring it up.
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This is interesting. As for swallowing large chunks of food blocking the intestines, it is not possible as the stomach acids dissolve the food.
Patricia


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    I agree, Linda doesn't have a medical degree, I know, there is none hanging on her wall.
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Hi Sasha, do you live in the same town as Linda now? I thought you were a long way apart but then I have been out of the loop for a long time and I am out of date. Forgive me for my absence. I hope to pop in now and then, Giddy


 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    No, Linda lives in Baja California in the city of Encenada. It is about a three day drive from Mazatlan.
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Well written,,,good look into your day.It's OK for people to care and that comes across very well in your postings. Enjoyed the read. You have some caring friends.. maybe a just too caring....what the hell, give'em a big hug.


 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
    Too caring can be overwhelming, but I will do my best not to let this bother me.
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It's definitely learning who you want to let in and help you more than others. I just watched it happen with my uncle. He chose to let me in, but that doesn't mean I told anyone anything I knew. I was just very vague. Maybe your friends just need to learn to be vague. Like giving her information but still holding some back. I hope everyone has learned their boundaries. It can certainly complicate things.


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Yes they have learned their boundaries and have been gracious about the misunderstanding. They are dear, sweet, and such helpful people, I am so glad we are still friends, Linda has decided to back off. I am sure she realizes she crossed over the line this time.
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I am glad to read that this situation has been resolved to your satisfaction. It is especially difficult to handle someone's lack of boundaries when he or she is a close and caring friend. (But it can be so-o-o-o annoying!)


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    YOu are right, all is well now so no more complaining.

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 14-Nov-2019
    :) Excellent.

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 14-Nov-2019
    :) Excellent. C'est la vie. Helps to get it out. :)

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Great... Me too.

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    It certainly can be.
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