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Scene...Seed Spitting Contest 2

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Lol!! Poor Mike... at least he doesnt have to see the icky 'mess' from the lunatic! ;) Enjoyed being part of the story, Sir Bill -- look forward to the next installment! ;) Yvette

The sIx spitters are back --> The six spitters are back [had to get my spelling error in, dontcha know?]


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    Thanks, Yvette. Can?t tell the difference between an I and L on my iPad.
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Pulling out all the stops by dragging Bowl and Phyllis in huh? This is well penned and quite a clever theme to use as a backdrop. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019



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    Phyllis is familiar with the Pons and Ned world. She's been here before.
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You did it! You're ahead of 1987 and it doesn't look like he'll change his practice of not promoting. I think watermelon seed spitting is disgusting, but it works for the characters. It looks like Ned is disqualified because he hasn't paid the entrance fee, but I wouldn't want to see him in a javelin catching competition. I found out who Mike Rowe is, and he is the guy who is frequently a guest on Fox. Seems to have sensible ideas about education. A smart idea to include names of FS members. That will get their attention. judi


 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019



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    Would you like being in the next scene?

reply by judiverse on 15-Nov-2019
    Sure. If you've got Lyenochka, Bowling, and Phyllis, I'd be in good company! judi
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They should have to spit peach pits for the finals. Sorry to see Ned out of it, I'd liked to see how Plan 9 reacts to being beat by him. Maybe you could have him win and the MIB show up to take him before he gets the prize. Can't wait to see what you come up with.


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    Thanks, Earl. Try for a big finish.
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I don't know how you did it, but I am starting to enjoy this. Please pray for me. My big takeaway from this thrilling account is to carefully watch Plan9 and never stand anywhere near his front, it could be deadly.


 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019



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    Plan 9 is a caution.
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This is a good continuance to your script. It is well-written, your plot, characters, and, dialogue are believable, easy to follow understand. Will we find out how Ned did in his contest?


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    Thanks, MD
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Darn it. You stopped. No fair. I want to see who wins. My favorite contestant is Plan 9. His spit results are hilarious. Hurry with the next installment. :)


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    Thanks, Phyllis, for coming to the spitting contest.

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    That was fun, having some members in the story. Thanks! :)
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Lol. Thanks for the mention, Bill. But I'm still hoping that Ned would win! Plan 9 is a little dangerous to have around. Except for his seeds, how do they distinguish whose seeds are where?


 Comment Written 15-Nov-2019



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    Pons may be making it up as he goes along.
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You had me laughing all through this silly watermelon spitting contest and I scroll down and it says TO BE CONTINUED~ What a cliff hanger!
I'll be watching with bated breath!!!
This really is comical!
Patty


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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Patty
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Another nice watermelon seed spitting contest post here, haha. They are fun to read and I guess they must be fun to write too. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day


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    Thank, Oliver.
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