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A look at fear and love

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BethShelby
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This is a very beautiful and moving spiritual piece that sounds as if you've given this a lot of thought and I can understand what you're saying about our duel conception of ourselves. Of course, as long as we're a part of this world we well continued to have somewhat duel natures. We aren't going to be made perfect until we are changed in the new life. But by feeding our Spiritual nature we can grow that in the direction and find our fear holding us back, less and less. Nice writing.


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020


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Fear is the world of our reality, our awakened life, our potential wasted, our dark side.

How very thought-provoking this is. I think we are too often raised with fear rather than love and it colors our world. At least this has been the case for me. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019


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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a well penned non-fiction piece that uplifts and inspires. I enjoyed this read as it instructs without pontificating; it elevates without criticism or judgment. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019


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I enjoyed reading this. Although, without appropriate citations, I think it is more opinion than non-fiction, but that's just a subjective assessment.

Here are a couple of points you might like to consider:

These two worlds can be called by any number of things. -- I think this is unnecessary, you've already demonstrated the point by numerous examples of how these two worlds may be considered.

The one and only thing that disrupts our abilities to see these true desires that are etched into our souls, and to reach their prescribed, loving destination in us, is our fear. -- Hmm... I'm not sure there is any rationale for this statement. You haven't stating any. Surely, plenty other things apart from fear prevent peoples' perceptions?

I wish you the best of luck when the contest is judged {smiles}.


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019


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This is a very well written piece that expresses truth in a creative way. I like how you use the metaphor of learning to dance, which involves fighting through the fear of making mistakes and not being good at it in order to even try it in the first place. That is a great mentality to accept that we're all in the process of practicing life instead of living in Fear of making mistakes.
Bill


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