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Scene...Seed Spitting 3

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This is a really cute and funny one scene script you have penned. You used very cute dialogue as always and especially funny when you said Elvis had left the building. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri


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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Teri
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LOL -- you are just having FAR too much fun with these, Sir Bill!! ;) Loved this one's interactions of Pallas and Ned -- thanx so much for the smile to start the day of grading off to a roaring start!! ;) Yvette :)


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Glad to help, Yvette. Bill
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hahahahaha, Bill. I love it. A spitting contest. I ask you! But where men and boys are involved nothing will ever surprise me. No offence intended here. I love it. Waiting for more. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Ulla.
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Will the bystanders finally realize how dangerous Plan9 is, and how much potential danger they are all in? Or will they blindly clap and wait for something else to happen that is perhaps more entertaining than the last thing that happened?


 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    No Elvis pop ups were injured making this scene. (Except that one)
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I liked the little bit of trash talk you've put in here. It made it seem more realistic. A crash test dummy would be a big improvement, so funny. What's even funnier is that neither won. Great job with this one.


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    Thanks, MD. These guys are fun to put in play.

reply by Mistydawn on 17-Nov-2019
    They seem like they are a fun bunch.
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This is a well penned script that flows well from end to end. You are able to squeeze quite a bit out of a spitting contest that probably takes about 15 minutes to complete LOL. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


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    Thanks, MA
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LOL! This is a fun, nonsense script. It provides an entertaining read {thumbs up}

This game separates mans from boys. -- I assume this is intentionally poor spoken English.

Maybe I oughtta impress that inta yer face. -- The colloquial is usually spelled "oughta".

I'm fine, but if you've got a crash test dummy to take Ned's place it might be an improvement. -- Ha, ha! {smiles}.


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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Alex, for giving this a look. Bill
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You set the scene nicely at the start and the character script is both humorous and engaging. It captured my attention all the way to the end. Well done, and thank you for sharing.


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    Thanks, Sabrina, for playing along. Bill
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Not fair. The alien has an unearthy advantage. My money is definitely on him. Only humans should compete to keep the game fair. But no one there seems to care, so forget I said it, and pay me when he wins. :)


 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Who knew seed spitting was dangerous?
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Lol! I was afraid for whatever popup dummy that Plan9 managed to get and sure enough - an explosion. I guess Ned is doing the pressing just fine. Still hoping he'd win!


 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Ned might still win as this is fiction and even THAT could happen.
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