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Why I love living here

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It sounds like you have some excellent friends who are like family to you. That's tough in a place you've lived all your life, let alone as a transplant in a foreign country.


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
    I agree, finding them has been a blessing. I plan to stay here forever since I doubt I could take them back with me if I decided to go back to the US.
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You are lucky to have friends like Agustin and Veronica. It's post like these that brighten my day, and have me believing in the kindness of human nature again.

Momasista -- I love this word {thumbs up}.

Thank you for a lovely post.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
    Veronica love that word too, she laughs every time I use it.
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No way out, you have to trust Agustin and Veronica your dear friends, your search for the shop XOXO goes on, but you are here on your way home; you love living here; well said, well done.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



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    Thanks, I very cautious when I go for a walk.
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I'm so happy your move was so good for you. I'm also happy you have good friends that are looking out for you and care about you so. It make my insides so happy. I love you girl and you deserve the world. Please don't get lost and stay safe


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



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    I hope I don't get lost either. It is scary when you cannot see or remember how to get back home. My walks are short and cautious.
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this cheerful little story. It is SO frightening to be lost, so I can sympathize with your concerns and I'm glad you have such nice friends to help you. I have been missing some of your posts I fear, so I'm not sure how you met these new friends. Did you move? Do you still go out to breakfast every day? I will try to catch up with my reading. Take care and stay safe. Loved this story.


 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    I met them through Linda, she used to be their neighbor. I moved out of El Centro about a year ago and move close to Veronica and Agustin.
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I am so happy to hear you are enjoying your new living situation and that your dear friends are taking such good care of you. I am also glad your blue pill worked and yo got some good rest.
Have a good day.
Patricia


 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
    Thanks, I am pleased you liked this one.
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I'm sure you don't need me to tell you how lucky you are to have such devoted friends. Such people are hard to find and it seems you have three.

Two little glitches but ignore them if you want:

I feel a need justify why I rely on them - should be 'a need to justify'

they prefer to bring whatever I need to me rather than looking for a lost old woman - word missing - 'rather than go looking for...'

Best wishes
Judy


 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
    I don't know why, but I cannot get back into this post to make any corrections.
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How precious it is to discover the reality of having true friends.
I believe the old adage that you are blessed to have one if not two close friends in a life time. They are to be cherished and I'm so glad that you can trust Agustin and Veronica.
It's been a while since I've even been reading FS let alone write. Thought I'd try to just keep up on what is happening with the 'friends' I've discovered here. It's wonderful that you are in a save place with loved ones around you. I'm glad for you!


 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
    Thank you for your kind and generous comments.
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It is wonderful that you have such good friends. So many do not and are left on their own. I saw a very sad story the other day, an 80 yr old lady put a note on her neighbors door. 'Will you be my friend? I am so lonely."
The neighbor felt bad she hadn't reach out before so went with her daughter with cupcakes and found the woman to be very sweet and good company. Her friends had died or moved and her family too busy. It is shameful how we neglect people in the US.


 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
    That is such a sad story and helped me realize again, how fortunate I am to have such wonderful friends.
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I appreciate you always keep us keeping updated on how you're doing. Your writing is very fresh and enjoyable to read. Thank you.

I feel a need justify why I rely on them so much. ( need TO justify???)


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thanks for catching the spag. I am so please you liked this one.
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