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Laughter is everything

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Your line "Friends are abundant and the laughter never stops" says it all and I am glad to read such an upbeat poem with such an upbeat picture. I can see why you would not want to be anyone else.


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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    I love where I am and who I am, what could a person possibly want more?
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Hello, again, and thank you for posting the poem you promised. I enjoyed your free verse, and it proves that poetry is another of your fortes, since it clearly conveys who you are. I am glad your life is filled with friends and laughter. Big cheers- Joan


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Yes the laughter never stops. Veronica has the most lovely and entertaining laugh. Hearing it, makes me laugh louder.
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Oh yes my dear lady, that is the joy of free verse, it has a form and is totally free of rhyme. It makes sense and is a joy to read. It is a free verse and is so you


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thanks, I am so pleased you liked this one. It was fun to try a simple poem.
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I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem. I have no clue if this if free verse or not. I'm not at all a poet, but I enjoyed reading and that's all that important to me. LOL


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thank, I am thrilled you liked it.
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As far as I am concerned it is free verse but I am not a poet, I am barely a writer. I am sure it is good being you.
Rikki***********************************************************************************************************************************


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    Thanks, I think you are a great writer.

reply by Rikki66 on 19-Nov-2019
    Passable sure great?
    Rikki
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I enjoyed your free verse poem, Sasha. It reads well and describes you well from what you have shared here on FS. I'm thrilled you love where you live. Take care. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, Jan


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thanks, I am pleased you liked it.
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I love it! And it's a free verse as free as any I've ever seen. The meaning is also "freeing" because - it's it takes time and wisdom to finally be content to be ourselves! Great job. One teeny suggestion would be to add a question mark at the end. But it's your choice. So glad you are YOU!


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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thanks, I'll add the ?
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Sasha,

Looks good to me. I understand that technical free verse can be more intricate, but I think for this site, you'll done well. *smile* You expressed yourself and made us smile. haha Thanks!


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    I won't be trying a technical free verse for a while.
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This definitely is free verse. It's a cute poem and very cute artwork to
go with it. You are satisfied with yourself and having fun.
Thanks for sharing this.


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    You are welcome.
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This is cute! Love the picture! I am not one to comment on Poetry. I don't write much of it. I use to when I was in high school not so much now. As for the word: forte....yes I do believe you spelled it right. :) Course now i need to add another sentence before FS will let me hit the send button.


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thanks, I am pleased you liked the one.
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