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Laughter is everything

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Great spelling sweety. Not a spag anywhere and I loved the picture is that you or your Mum hehe. Stick around. Now I am here for another year have to get on with stuff.


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You certainly must love it in Mazatlan, your poem and the picture say it all. I would say, yes, that's a free-verse poem. Why would you question your talent?


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019

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Hi,
My sister is 77 and her loving husband of 25 years died last year. One of the first things she did, and she's never written poetry, was to write a poem titled Me. She said she discovered the word Me for the first time ever. Apparently her hubby was loving but not giving. At least you found mirth early. - Lobber


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019


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    I've always experienced mirth.
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A Very well-written free verse poem about who you are and that laughter is important to you. You get a lot of it where you live and that is all that's important to you.


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019


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    Yes, I get a lot of mirth here.
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Sasha, This is a very cute and well written free verse poem you have penned about being you. I feel that way about being me. You used very good words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri


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    Don't ever expect me to write a poem that rhymes... Just won't happen.
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It definitely qualifies as free verse, Sasha. I enjoyed the read very much and I think you captured a definite feeling and emotion in the words. Well done.


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    Thanks, just don't ever expect me to write a poem that rhymes... Just won't happen.
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I am with you in the unknown wilderness of poetry. I love free verse though and that you nailed. Love the happiness of just being in this poem. Great job. You made me smile


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019


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    Thanks, just don't ever expect me to write a poem that rhymes... Just won't happen.
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Yes! You spelled it correctly and yes it is a free verse poem .... a wonderful expression of the joy of being you!! ;) Thanx for sharing, Sasha, always enjoy your unbridled emotions -- they are contagious!! ;) :)


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    Thanks, I am so glad you liked this one.
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I think this is a fine poem Sasha, the rules for a free verse are much broader than form poetry, the lines are a little hazy anyway, I've seen free verse, that I would classify as prose, but it doesn't matter what I think. The good thing about poetry, you can say it with fewer words, the trick is the strength of those words. By gad I think you've done it Sasha, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019


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    Thanks for the kind words about my attempt at poetry.

reply by royowen on 18-Nov-2019
    Pretty factual I think Sasha

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    Thanks.
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Very good piece. Yes, why be anyone else if you are content as you are. Many people are not that lucky and hate their lives. You are one of the lucky... or smart... ones. :)

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 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019


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    I am so pleased you liked my little poem.
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