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Hell is hot


woke up on wrong side of bed

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I'm happy to know that paradise is not all that it is cracked up to be or I will continue hopelessly think that it comes trouble-free. I feel as if a heavy load has been lifted from my search.

Phillip


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
    Thanks for the lovely 6 stars, I sincerely appreciate them.

reply by pbomar1115 on 22-Nov-2019
    You're welcome, Sasha.

    Phillip
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Me gustó tu publicación y espero que puedas descubrir qué está mal con tu computadora, televisión, skin y amigos.
Translation:
I liked your post and hope that you can find out what is wrong with your computer, television, skin, and friends.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



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    I doubt I'll ever find anyone to fix my computer and have even less hope for my television.
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I am Australian.
Therefore, I write like an Australian.
 
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I don't know if you can get MooGoo in Mexico, but it's wonderful for dry skin. It's non greasy and not too expensive. You might get it on eBay!
eye lids
eyelids
capture
captured


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
    Thanks for catching the spags.
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I know no Spanish so I'm no help. Is there a way to tape something on your remote or get it so you can feel the on and off button instead of guessing? I can't watch those shows on murders and murderers...at least not before bed. My parents always watch those shows tho. I have also rubbed lotion in my eyes. It's awful. Just make sure it's completely rubbed in before you rub your eyes. And I'm not a fan of cold showers. I would die if I had to take one every morning. I'm so happy to see this post, even if it wasn't the happiest, but you just make me smile and I hope you know how amazing and incredible you are.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



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    No, cannot see well enough to write when I am walking. The bright skies make it almost impossible to see.
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That TV of yours would be SOOO annoying. I hope in time you get the better of it.

I picked up a few points, all of them minor so feel free to ignore them.

Veronica insists there is no point of going to a dermatologist - delete 'of'

Dr. Fupen speaks English and he is more expensive than non-English speaking Doctors - lower case for 'doctors'

Investigation Discovery is airing its big series, Ted Bundy the mind of a serial killer. - comma after 'Bundy'

At the time of his Arrest in Florida, his name became a household word - lower case for 'arrest'

He was capture, escaped to kill again, and caught in Florida - should be 'captured'. And 'was caught'

Bundy was a vicious and sick man but like so many others, I was fascinated - comma after 'but'

The public has always been fascinated by evil, seeing so many Investigation Discovery is probably the basis for my fascination. - replace comma with period.

Because of Bundy I changed my mind about the death penalty. - comma after 'Bundy'

but the world is a safe place without him - should be 'safer'

Hope your day goes well
Judy


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thanks for catching the spags.
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Hello,
I'm 72 and gave up most of my aging friends when they morphed into a negative monster. They would call me then tell me they woke up with a headache. I pointed out to them that, unlike some folks, at least they have a bed. More pointedly, they should also be happy that at least they woke up. - Lobber


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    I love you philosophy on life. I agree completely. No one likes to be around negative people, especially not me. There were times when I found myself at the top of the list in that category, but fortunately, I saw the negativity and put it behind me.
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I am sorry you are still having trouble with the remote. Some of them have such small buttons that seeing them is almost impossible. My son in law got me a remote that has big buttons so it is easy for me to use.
Patricia


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    It is not the size of the buttons for me, it is not knowing the correct combination of buttons needed to turn it on. Smart TV's are not meant for old, blind, and dumb people.
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Ted Bundy was a monster. If there are any now I suppose the
that Law enforcement is keeping it from the press. It has been a while since I have heard about one, but then I try not to follow such news. Things like that should not be sensationalized. Hope you can get your TV and computer figured out. I know it is frustrating. Nancy:)


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    I doubt I will ever know exactly which buttons to press to turn on my television it continues to boggle... I still hate Smart TV's.
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This was a particularly good ramble today, Sasha. You and that smart tv again. And, I can only imagine the dark words you are learning on Investigation Discovery. Shows like that freak me out, so I think I will skip the Ted Bundy expose. My daughter is a psychiatrist, and I have listened to some horrible Ted Talks on serial killers. I hated every moment of them.
Oh, and I also loved your back door in the shower. Now that's funny.
Thanks for making me smile.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



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    I love my backdoor too.
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Halfree
 
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Think you write very well and your postings are welcomed by me. I get a view of Mexico that I would not know if not for your postings. Anyway, keep on chugging, look forward to next posting.


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thanks, I am pleased you like these silly posts.
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