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...religion IS politics

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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello djeckert

When I first saw the length of your essay, I said to myself
this looks a bit to long to read.

Well I quickly changed my mind and found your thoughts of what is truth or lies, yes is worth reading


Gert


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019


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This is well penned with no overt evidence of SPAG making for a smooth and easy read. The content is well thought out and cohesive in its structure. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


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Your summation said it all. The left leaning socialist/liberal is a religion, a cult really, intolerate of our faith and values. The great divide has never been more stressed. The need for Christ has never been more obvious.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019


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Suzanna Ray
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Dear Author you have expressed your arguments ( a legal term for opinions) very well. I followed your discourse with out much effort, witch I consider, a sign of good writing.
The only suggestion i would make, is to conclude you essay with a few reviewing remarks. In other words I think the essay ends TOO abruptly! You do not need to add more material, only reiterate your primary points, to let your reader get off the galloping horse after it has slowed down a bit, and preferably, stopped .


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019


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