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The Message of Endearment without romantic words.

  3 total reviews 
Comment by
angel123
 
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Your love poem is lovely. It flows and rhymes well with a touching and heart felt message of love and togetherness. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice is nice. Flowers best defines romance. Best wishes!


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
    Thank you for your kind comments. Your review is much appreciated.
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Eve Lovell
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Hello, you did well writing a poem without the traditional words of love. The closest you came to it was 'cherish'. I enjoyed this and I imagine it is quite difficult to write a love poem without lovely words. So, nicely done. Cheers, and have a great day, Eve.


 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Eve. The feedback is much appreciated.
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Y. M. Roger
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Aaahhh, that wonderful moment when both hearts are in the same place and can make their love known.... and you did it without using either of those words!! ;) :) Great offering for this contest and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)


 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much for the excellent review. I value your feedback.
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