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To Heaven I Look for Peace


On the death of a lover

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Therese Caron
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This is a beautiful piece of work. The description of love and peace, and where to find it is touching and well written. The words flow beautifully. This is a wonderful poem!


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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
    Thanks very very much!
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Darlene Franklin
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Oh, how this tugs at the heartstrings. The story gradually unfolds itself, "touch me while I sleep/Take me to your heavenly bed/If only for one night, one dream." I expect she does from time to time. My daughter did, after she died. I don't mean I think she was. I dreamt about her.


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
    Thanks so much for your kind review and for sharing your own experience. You get it. And I get yours, too.

reply by Darlene Franklin on 25-Nov-2019
    And that eases those initial months. I dreamed about my daughter again this week. (It's been 11 years). She had aged, and she had a child. Not only that, she had three eyes! Strange dream. Unlike the earlier ones

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
    Wow, I wonder if she is sending you a message via dreams. Try to figure it out. It feels significant in a good way.
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This is such an emotion charged poem. To lose a loved one is a very painful experience. Life goes on, the sun shines, people laugh but the one left behind is so heartbroken and numb. I love the ending "To heaven I look for peace;To heaven I reach for you". I feel my lost loved one with me spiritually every day.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful inspirational poem on the death of a loved one.
Kind regards.


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
    I'm blessed with your review and your understanding words. Experiences like this touch us all, I believe.

reply by moonsunrise on 24-Nov-2019
    Yes they do. I believe as well.
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Very loving poetry. I enjoyed reading and can relate. Our aim is for the highest level of heaven. Our loved ones we remember and of course we want to reunite with them in heaven. Peace to you.


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A very well-written heartfelt poem about how we can find the ones we loved and passed on. We can look up to heaven to find them and find peace in our hearts that they are there.


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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm honored.
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Good job, Mystery Author, with the contest prompt. I enjoyed reading your well-thought out poem although it is poignant. The words are heart-felt and readers can feel the emotion and longing of the one left behind. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan


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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
    Oh, thank you so much for your heart-felt review. Your lovely words make me feel good.
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I'm sorry for your loss. Beautifully written and free flowing form. It tells me how much you want to be together, with this love you miss. If only in a dream.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much for your sweet review.
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I love your meter and the personalised views, however for me the last two lines say it all. Beautiful, well done. I am so sorry for your loss, this poem says you crave to feel their touch once more. There love is in your heart obviously.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 22-Nov-2019
    I'm honored to have your sweet review!
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I think this is a lovely entry for the On the Death of a Loved One writing prompt.
The love and the promise to someday be together again are clear in this verse.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much!
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Eve Lovell
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Hello, very strong ending to this poem. The words are heartfelt, so if it isn't biographical, you have certainly added a lot of feeling to your words. I noticed no errors and the publishing choices were very attractive.

And for anyone who has lost someone they loved, this is very poignant.

'Let me awaken with your arms still wrapped around me... '


If it is true, I am very sorry for your loss, and hope you are travelling okay today. Take care, Eve.


 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
    Ah, thank you so very much. Yes, it is biographical. Travel today is good with wonderful memories.
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