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The Poetic Diary - Entry 26


Some of my daily thoughts in poetic form

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robyn corum
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Yeah, yeah, yeah,

I've heard alllllll of this before. A thousand times before. You think you're the first to pledge your undying love??? Uh huh. But then the first time things get hard - the bills come in or the roof leaks - and there you go. Just like the rest of 'em.

Not falling for it. Good try, though. A for effort.

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hehehehe

I know I'm evil. I really do like these posts. But you know you can post two a day, right? I'd love to see an old one vs. a new one - see how you've grown and developed as a writer since 2007. Challenge you a bit. What do you say?


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    LOL! Swear all this is true!

    I like a challenge, I will have to find time and work on that. I am coming close to the end of my old m]post anyway. I usually only post when I'm at work so sometimes my time is limited.

    Have a great day the Yin to my Yang
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What a beautiful poem, the contrast of all the ways this woman makes you feel, contrasted with the simple statement, "I'm afraid to let you steal it."


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your time and review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Great job with this diary entry in the form of a poem expressing your strong attraction to a lady and admitting the fear involved, which is realistic and part of the process.
Bill


 Comment Written 21-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your time and review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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