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The Poetic Diary - Entry 27


Some of my daily thoughts in poetic form

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Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Roddy, and at least you can close your eyes and see pleasant things--I close my eyes and see my drunk Uncle Harlan leering lopsided at me and saying, "Try to make yourself useful for once and get me another beer--you think you can figure that out, idiot?"


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
    Hey Mike, I think something is seriously wrong with you (In a good way). I think I'd have a better chance of figuring out the female species and we know that will never happen. Thanks for the review my friend.
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AAAWWWW what emotion you put into this piece. There is someone you have been thinking of for this one to take the form it did. Meter is off but the raw emotion is where it needs to be


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
    Thank you my friend. I'm definitely more emotion and less structure. More message less mechanics.
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13,

You must really be crazy about this girl. *smile* She is all you write about in this diary. *smile* I don't know the end of the story yet - do you get her or not?


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
    Hello Yin thank you for another review. I'm a lot of things and unfortunately a hopeless romantic is one of them. Unfortunately sometimes the thing you want doesn't live up to the expectation or fantasy...??...if at first you don't succeed.....blah blah blah
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I liked the repetitive nature of this poem:
I see you;
Oh no I don't, it's a dream;
I close my eyes to see you;
Oh no, you're not here.
{Thumbs up}.

Nicely done!


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
    Thank you sir!
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