Little Toddler Lies
A two year old lies about a personal adventure
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Have faith in the woman who follows after the storm

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Cybertron1986
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What an adoring piece that is a genuine voice of the human spirit, captured perfectly in the closing sentence that spotlights the present. Your voice continues to hook the reader throughout. That's good writing! Well done.


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    I'm very honored, thank you
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Nice poem, I enjoyed it. It flows well and I like the way you keep bringing back the bottle as imagery, it works well. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    Thanks so much for reading
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What a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I might have recognised my past self in some of those lines.

"The past can provide important clues about future possibilities,
but don't be fooled into believing it can write your story."

This is such an interesting passage.

I found no errors and I have no suggestions for improvement because it's great.
Well done,
Jan


 Comment Written 22-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    Thanks Jan
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