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2-4-2 poem

30 total reviews

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WryWriter

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Your poem makes a striking statement. Envy is one of the most destructive emotional forces in humankind. The artwork fascinates and goes so well with your poem's theme. I like the way the "ee" sounding ending "y" is in the first and last lines. Great job on this one!

Comment Written 30-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019

Thank you very much once again for this lovely review

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Jeffrey L. Michaux

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You're absolutely right about that. It's definitely not friendly. I wonder why they associate envy with the color green. Perhaps its because green is like the color of grass and envy like grass when cultivated grows until it's cut. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking and well written work. Well done!

Comment Written 25-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Thank you very much.

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duchessofdrumborg

An iron fist in a velvet glove

Sharpen your quill every day!

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"Envy", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.

Comment Written 25-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Thank you very much.

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Brenda Elizabeth Rose

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Well you certainly met all of the contest. Of course your image and background were green (with envy). You summed up envy very well. Good like in the contest and thank you for sharing. ~Brenda

Comment Written 24-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Thank you very much.

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patcelaw

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I suppose there are many folks who are guilty of showing envy from time to time. I try to be happy for folks when something good comes their way.
Patricia

Comment Written 24-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Thank you very much.

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Dorothy Farrell

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Hello Sanku, now this is a clever piece of writing. Envy - the green eyed monster, compared with the green and pleasant land. Well thought out. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x

Comment Written 24-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Thank you very much.

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Joan E.

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I admired your description of "envy" and your emphasis on the "green" color with the eye-catching artwork and background. Best wishes in the 2-4-2 contest. Cheers- Joan

Comment Written 23-Nov-2019

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Thank you very much.

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Sally Law

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I hate this sin and have experienced it more than I'd like to say. What is it so hard for people to be happy when someone else is successful or has found happiness? It remains a mystery.
A good theme and entry form the contest.
Sally :)

Comment Written 23-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Thank you very much.Frankly I too don't understand it .Some genes..I think.

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lauralumummu

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I like it and green is a great color but envy is ugly, so right. You say a lot with a few words and insight. Great entry for the contest. All the best, Laura

Comment Written 23-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Thank you very much.

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rama devi

May All Beings Be Happy

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Good pun on green - as eco-friendliness brings a new meaning to the word Green in these modern times. The green-eyed monster still leaves, and actually threatens the good green...

Potent and relevant theme. Well done. YOu accomplished much within those few syllables. Bravo.

Namaskaram!
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019

Namaskaram. Thank you very much.Are you in India? enjoying the rains?

reply by rama devi on 28-Nov-2019

Namaskaram, dear. I'm in Florida at the moment--likely for a year! Had gone back to India and returned already.

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