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Scene at a Christmas Shop

a one scene script with Pons and Ned

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You are off to a well penned beginning as you combine your beloved characters with Christmas flavor and a touch of spirited magic to boot. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
    Thank you, MA. Happy Thanksgiving!
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Yes very well done, I can't wait to see what happens to the magic air balloon and what Ned may dream up to be magic, another excellent and humorous read****kahpot


 Comment Written 27-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
    Thanks, kahpot.
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Oh, this is a wonderful start to the story!! Although, at least here, Ned didn't get 'hurt'.... Looking forward to the next installment as I move through the list. :) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
    Ned is in for a ride in this series.
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I took your advice and went back to the beginning.
Are these characters you've written about before, in a new setting?
I like Ned's sense of wonder. You show his childlike nature and level of thinking. How fortunate he is to have a friend like Pons.


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
    I?ve done Pons and Ned scenes for a couple of years now. They have grown from Abbott and Costello routines to these broader story lines.
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Ned's going to make Christmas magical with his balloon. I really expected some Black Friday hand to hand combat. Good to see Ned and Pons getting into the Christmas spirit. Very nice job.


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Earl. It goes downhill pretty quickly from here.
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I guess Maw has to find things to keep Ned busy. I bet he could make some decorations with some different kinds of pasta and some paint(or felt tip pens to color the pasta) Little things make him so happy. I might even let him have my magic balloon.


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Cindy, for going back for this. Bill
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It would be quite easy to feel sorry for Ned but I don't think there is any need. He seems to have things worked out pretty well. Thanks for the smiles.


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2019



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    Ned is a good soul.
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Ned should be nicknamed the scarecrow as he is in serious need of a brain. I like Ned, I really do. He actually makes me feel like I may be a little smarter than I at first thought that I was.


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 24-Nov-2019
    Ned is me before coffee or after watching Fox News
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Neat idea to have Pez as Santa Claus. He sounds like my nephew, who isn't much into working. He was a Salvation Army Bell Ringer just to make a few bucks. It's sweet about Ned making those Christmas decorations--popsicle reindeer and pipe cleaner angels. There must be something about those magic balloons. Guess we'll find out. judi


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Judi, for giving this a look. We?re going to give Ned a merry yule remember.

reply by judiverse on 24-Nov-2019
    You're welcome. Ned will appreciate that. judi
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Bill, This is a very cute script with Ned and Pons at the Christmas Shop. You used very cute words and pretty imagery from the art work you chose. I like where Ned told Santy to tell Jesus hi. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 23-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Teri
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