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1-6-1 Poem

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Bill Schott
 
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This 1-6-1, Crowd, has the right set up and fills the reader with a sense of belonging as one imagines the energy that such a gathering generates.


 Comment Written 29-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
    Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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Debbie Pope
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As I peruse the entries to the contest, yours stands out. I grew up in the Civil Rights, Vietnam era, and I have always regretted that I took a passive role in the protests. Marching to right wrongs is something to be proud of. I'm definitely not violent, but I should have marched.
Good luck in the competition. I like your poem and the way that you think.


 Comment Written 28-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 28-Nov-2019
    Thank you! I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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Mark D. R.
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Good rhymes for your contest entry. Your selected artwork enhances and complements your syllable-restricted entry.

I am OK to be in loud crowds. LOL


 Comment Written 27-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
    Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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Sallyo
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I am Australian.
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Scared
Ill-prepared
To be so-much-air-shared.
I understand the motive of this poem and though I don't feel the same... it's well put! Some people thrive in big groups.


 Comment Written 27-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
    Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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kahpot
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And what a crowd it is, it is a great atmosphere in big crowds as long as everyone is enjoying the time, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot


 Comment Written 27-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
    Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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Well done 1-6-1 poem a great entry for the contest. I don't like crowds too much even doing most of my Christmas shopping online. All the best, Laura---


 Comment Written 27-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2019
    Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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Janice Canerdy
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Oh, yes, there is a time to be shy and quiet--and a time to be HEARD, to be bold and loud! You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this enthusiastic piece.


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Barbaraj1
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Nice1-6-1 poem. I, myself, hate crowds. You have nice rhyming.
Your syllables are correct. The artwork is perfect. Good luck in this contest and thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
    Thank you! I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt.
You manage to tell a story about being part of a crowd in so few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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a very interesting poem that ones can think about
i really felt this poem and it touched my heart
very believable and your words gave special meaning
thank you for sharing it was an honor to read your work
it was a pleasure
i hope for the best in the contest


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
    Thank you! I am happy that you enjoyed my poem!
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