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We are the Gods


We just need to be told

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Barb Hensongispsaca
Barb Henson
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We are indeed the gods of our creation and the gods that will destroy what a power greater than we are has made. Good internal rhyming and monorhymes in the stanzas.


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
    Thank you Barb xx
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What a wonderful poem with an excellent message in there for everyone, your chosen artwork is excellent for these words, very well presented****kahpot


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
    Many thanks Kahpot , great review .
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A very lovely lilting rhyming poem about the Universe, yet, how are we the Gods. Do you mean that we are in control? We are certainly not the Creators. The chosen art is spectacular.


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2019
    I think we have been here before Raffaelina, me you are the Gods created by our parents and in turn we create our children with a little help. The ancient Egypians gmhas it right , no life without man and women so treated each other equally , Cleopatra etc.. until invaders showed them the opposite , thank you for you review xx
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