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It's not about the Trump


It's about trumping the swamp

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Jannypan (Jan)
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All the ill of the world seem to rest on Trump's shoulders. How many times has he been accused of causing climate change? He has already been tried and found guilty in the court of public opinion. Where are hiss rights? As for JEpstein. That is another story.


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019


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Alex Rosel
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I don't specialize in poetry, but I thought Haiku poems were meant to evoke imagery of the natural world. I think your poem is more suited to the Senryu form which tends to highlight human foibles.

I wish you the best of luck when the contest is judged {smiles}.


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 26-Nov-2019
    Hey Alex, is that an Ironic smile?lol. I know, it's got no shot. ( probably even if it were about nature rather than human nature) And you are right about what a haiku actually is. But those nature poems bore the livin' shit out of me anyways, so you will probably never see one from me. Blessings
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