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Lune poem

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Joan E.
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What an eye-catching artwork you selected to complement your Lune! Your succinct poem is quite insightful. Best wishes in the competition and enjoy the holiday season- Joan


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much for reading my little poem.
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Hi Sanku. This is a well written piece that I enjoyed reading. Good philosophy here. Best of luck in the Lune contest if it hasn't been judged yet. Marilyn


 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much.
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patcelaw
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I really like the thought contained in such a few words. Just as wrinkles can be cherished as wisdom lines on the aged.
Patricia


 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much.
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I never looked at it that way before! When thing happen it sometimes offers us the opportunity to choose a wiser course. Slivers of wisdom. Thank you for sharing your insights.


 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much for appreciating my little work .This is the best reward I can get.
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Excellent poem. I love the ending line. I'm reminded of chinks in armor--good when fighting an enemy, and cracks casting light upon darkness enabling that which is hidden to become known. Good artwork choice for theme. Enjoyed reading your work.


 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much for reviewing this and going to my profile and reviewing my two other works .I am touched and honoured.
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Congrats on All Time Best for your Lune Poem. Loved the photo to compliment your few words that said so much. Wisdom wafts in through ancient cracks made so long ago. I liked your words so much. Out with the new, in with the old because the walls do speak; not like modern plastic today. Well done my friend.


 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much for the trouble you have taken to read and review.
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Like the double meaning of this. Impregnable things cannot absorb things. A closed mind will never learn. Great poem. Very smart. Great picture choice. And good luck in the contest


 Comment Written 29-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Great you have got my idea spot on.Thank you very much for your review.
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An ancient truth explored here afresh in this succinct poetic form of the Lune- even 'slivers of wisdom ' are extremely precious and enlightening - nice pic


 Comment Written 29-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much
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Cracks in our old mental doorways may let slivers of enlightenment through indeed. Great as a metaphoric poem offering also. Blessings to you and your family. Great photo included goes very well with your posting. Good Luck.


 Comment Written 29-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much.God less you .
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The author's words are interesting, creative and thought provoking.
The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The poem flows and connects well and gave me much to think about. The artwork is perfect and compliments both the theme and words of this poem well.

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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thanks .
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