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Goodwill


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Liz O'Neill
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I like your use of the allusion. This will draw the reader in. That's the sign of a good writer, to get reader to pause. you have written a poem which might be mundane or cliche' but be using an archaic term you give it a new other life. Well thought out.


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much for your read and review, Liz, especially your detailed appraisal of the write. I view you as a comprehensive reviewer, and I appreciate your commentary. Thank you...Eve

reply by Liz O'Neill on 06-Dec-2019
    Thank you for you compliment.

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2019
    You are very welcome indeed, Liz...Eve
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I do like this 2-4-2 entry a lot. Eloquently written in its syllable restricted form. The rhymes and photograph are just an added plus.

Best wishes in contest.


 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much for your read and review, Mark - I am delighted you found the work appreciable, given its required brevity, and thank you for liking it...Eve
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Thank you for the definition of "meed" in your notes and the parallel picture. I enjoyed your succinct description of "Goodwill" and your rhyme in this 2-4-2 form. Best wishes in the competition- Joan


 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much for your read and review, Joan, especially your appreciation of my afterthought. I am pleased I decided to include the definition, which addresses my use of such an uncommon word - but, it suited my rhyming intent, thus the description. Thank you again, Joan...Eve
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I think this is an excellent entry in the 2-4-2 contest. The message is an important one and I hope a lot of readers absorb it and are motivated to act upon it. Best wishes in the contest, Eve!!


 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much for your read and review, Janet, especially your very kind commentary. I am delighted you found it important, and I appreciate your warm approval...Eve
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What a wonderful offering for this contest, Eve -- your weaving of rhyme inside such a limited format is very effective here and makes for a grand message for a wide audience! :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest! :) Yvette


 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much for your generous review, Yvette - as always, you make my day, in this case, my days, special and uplifting. Thank you again for appreciating my message so warmly...Eve
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I've not sure I fully understand your meaning here Eve, I read your words several times. But after reading your notes I know your meaning now, fine words, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much for your read and review, Dolly, and for reading my notes. The word just seemed to write itself - one I undoubtedly read somewhere. Since its is certainly uncommon in use today, I am glad I included its definition. Thank you for appreciating that fact, especially from one I so admire, both personally and as an exceptional writer, in particular your mastery of the sonnet, which I consider just shy of amazing, and remains my menace to date...Eve
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Goodwill

practiced in deed,

breeds meed...


Wow. Thanks for teaching me a new word tonight. That is awesome. I loved the poem. I appreciate your author's notes giving the definition. It's amazing to me how just a few words can speak so clearly and mean so much. Wonderful work.
All the best,
Jan


 Comment Written 30-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    I cannot thank you enough for your read and review, Jan. I am honored by your "Exceptional" rating and word appreciation. Thank you so much for your sterling review...Eve
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