Take Your Burdens to Jesus
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Remembering why we are celebrating

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Gert sherwood
 
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Smiles Raffaelina Lowcock
I love your rhyming poem of how you told us in your thoughts with in your poem, of how you remember the of Our Lord ( Jesus) birth.
Gert.


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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    Thank you, Gert, your words mean a lot. Your review is so appreciated.

reply by Gert sherwood on 01-Dec-2019
    You are welcome
    Raffaelina Lowcock.
    Gert
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Yes, we know that Jesus' entry in this realm,was, as scripture says not an auspicious entry, nor was the comfort of the Christ-child, uppermost in the mind of God, it was the opposite as the great of all Kings was born, He gave His poverty that we could be rich, a beautifully and deeply spiritual post, Raffaelina, well done, blessings, Roy


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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    Thank you for the outstanding words depicting His birth. I do appreciate your attention to my poem.

reply by royowen on 01-Dec-2019
    Well done
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What a lovely poem for the first Sunday of Advent! It's really what the Lord wants us to do to prepare our hearts to welcome our Savior as we remember His coming to Earth.

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your very thoughtful review. I do appreciate your words.
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You had me with the opening line. "In my heart, Mary, I have reserved a room." The poem flows fluidly and points to that central truth, we're celebrating the birth of our Savior on Christmas Eve.

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    Thank you for your considerate review. I appreciate your words.

reply by Darlene Franklin on 01-Dec-2019
    You're welcome.
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