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The Poetic Diary - Entry 30


Some of my daily thoughts in poetic form

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Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Roddy--and putting your heart out there to possibly stomped into the mud and pissed on is a scary deal. That's why I'm on the computer all day-you can't be hurt if you're not out there casting about for love!


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
    Thank you my friend. So tell me, will the Senate do the right thing?

reply by Mike Stevens on 04-Dec-2019
    Nope, I don't see it

reply by Anonymous Member on 04-Dec-2019
    Nope, I don't see it
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Once again you have given Hallmark a run for its money. It's so hard to say it first especially when it's not reciprocated. I said it to someone once and the response was "Thank You." Kind as I believe they were attempting to be it was not the response for which I'd hoped. I think I died a little inside. Thank you for articulating the anxiety so many of us feel when we love so intently and feel most vulnerable! Well Done!


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
    You are more than welcome my friend. I have had that almost exact thing happen to me and I definitely died a little bit, but if at first you don't succeed...??.blah blah blah. Thank you for the Wonderful Review. Always appreciated.

reply by Brenda Henderson on 04-Dec-2019
    Yeah it does cut. :)
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For random thoughts, this entry was engagingly moving. As the reader, it took me into the mindset of the speaker with that moment of question. I love these subjects of expression, and to hear it in a different point of view brings about that relative and defining memories we all share in many unique ways. Nicely done.


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your insight and review, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Oh, what a poetic telling of the practice of pulling petals from a flower, she loves me, she loves me not. Not really, but that's what it reminded of. Afraid to admit love if you don't know if it's reciprocated.


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
    Yes you nailed it. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the great review.

reply by Darlene Franklin on 04-Dec-2019
    You're welcome.
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