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End the hate


A minute of Poetry

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Darlene Franklin
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You did it brilliantly. And I love your perspective on President Trump. You chronicled his unexpected rise, his disastrous (to me) policies, and the only solution - to work together and stop the hate. Well done.


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    WOW! Thank you so much for such a gracious review. Though we all are different in our own ways, it the commonality unite us and make this world a better place. We all breath, eat, and sleep the same and want the best for our families and loved ones. We are more alike than we are different. If we all just lived by the
    GOLDEN RULE - Do unto others as you would have them do unto you.... this world would be a so much better place. Well enough of my ranting. Thanks again for the six stars.

reply by Darlene Franklin on 10-Dec-2019
    Absolutely and amen. You are most welcome.--Darlene
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Dancemom
 
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This is a good entry for the minute contest. You have successfully used the correct syllable count. Very well written. Great job and thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 06-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your time and review, it is greatly appreciated!
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Janice Canerdy
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Your poem sends a clear message about the hatred and chaos in this country. The only cure for hatred is God. Mankind cannot simply dismiss it. Also, your poem does not have the rhyme scheme required for the minute poem.

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 Comment Written 06-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your time and review, much appreciated! I just reread the rules of the contest and it stated that for this contest it just had to have the proper syllable count and rhyme and didn't have to follow the iambic meter.
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Therese Caron
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A divided country cannot stand. My heart is breaking with what has happened to the greatest country in the world. I do not like Mr. Trump, but we had hate before him too. We rely too much on media, and the social media fills minds of young people with too much damaging behavior, along with hate. We need so much change, everywhere. That said, your poem is very catchy and thought provoking.


 Comment Written 06-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you. You are so right we had hate before Trump and will continue to have it well after he is gone. That being said, as the leader of the "free world" hate and division shouldn't come out your mouth, a leader is suppose to lead by example not divide.

reply by Therese Caron on 10-Dec-2019
    I agree completely. President Obama had pure class when he spoke to anyone, I have seen none from Mr. Trump.
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In my Australian opinion...he should never have bought his way into office. I liked your first attempt at a minute poem. The writing is on the wall and he will eventually fall. If not today, he will be stopped to play. Tall poppies are soon cut down. XXK.


 Comment Written 06-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    WOW! Thanks for the six stars. He ran on making America great Again but he just turned the country into a joke that the whole world is laughing at. Anyone who defends him or his behavior should be ashamed of themselves. It should not be about left or right, but right or wrong.

reply by Aussie on 11-Dec-2019
    God sees everything we do. Trump will not miss out. Happiness sent to you from Australia! XXK.
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Mark D. R.
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I do like your poem in your new style. Since I am anti-Trump, I easily support your sentiment. The Trumpster is IMHO a vile man, who is dividing our country and is destroying the goodwill and credibility of our great country with our worldwide allies.

Mark


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your time and review. He ran on making America great Again but he just turned the country into a joke that the whole world is laughing at. Anyone who defends him or his behavior should be ashamed of themselves. It should not be about left or right, but right or wrong.
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Point well taken! Hate just requires too much energy pointed in the wrong direction. It just makes everyone hurt and feel bad. We could be so much happier if we focused instead on the things we have in common. Well done!


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    WOW! Thanks for the six stars. He ran on making America great Again but he just turned the country into a joke that the whole world is laughing at. Anyone who defends him or his behavior should be ashamed of themselves. It should not be about left or right, but right or wrong.

reply by Brenda Henderson on 10-Dec-2019
    You're very welcome!
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Your poem speaks volumes. I have never seen the division I see since Mr. Trump became President. Some family members and friends no longer communicate or see each other. How can this be good for our country if it is dividing family and friends? He promotes anger, hate, and only likes people of his stature and with his thought process. I do believe that if Our Lord was down here he would not be having dinners with Mr. Trump. He would be caring for the lowly, the ones rejected because of who they are and what they believe and also all those who are just trying to survive, spiritually, physically and emotionally in this world we live in.
Thanks for sharing. Please America rethink who you will be voting for in 2020.


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your time and review. He ran on making America great Again but he just turned the country into a joke that the whole world is laughing at. Anyone who defends him or his behavior should be ashamed of themselves. It should not be about left or right, but right or wrong.
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Sadly, It seems more and more difficult to get opposing view political poetry reviews these days. Awesomely stated and format fitting compliance. Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless you.


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your time and review. He ran on making America great Again but he just turned the country into a joke that the whole world is laughing at. Anyone who defends him or his behavior should be ashamed of themselves. It should not be about left or right, but right or wrong.
Comment by
Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Minute contest.
Your short verse tells a clear story about the political situation.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 10-Dec-2019
    Thank you for your time and review.
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