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The flip


A newscast coming our way

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CrystieCookie999
 
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Ha ha, you have done Johnny Cash proud, setting this in a western prison (Were the prison machinists wearing "Folsom Prison Blues," perhaps?). Flaky fake news indeed. This is hilarious political satire that even a sixth grader would appreciate. It's a wave, no it's a flip, no it's a wave, no it's a flip! I get the fake news people keep emphasizing 'seems' and 'appears' to avoid legal retribution. Nice job with a last name on Swan P. Slayer to get a connotation of a possible gunslinger, too. Thanks for entering!


 Comment Written 06-Dec-2019


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Mia Twysted
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All this over "flipping the bird"? Wow. I felt as if I was listening to a real news report happening live in front of me. It makes me want to know what the outcome will indeed be.


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019


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Sharon Haiste
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This is an interesting entry for the Humorous Short Script Contest.
Humour aside, it shows how things can be interpreted incorrectly.
Funny and well done.
Sharon


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2019


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