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I am Trashed.


Minute poem

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This is what can happen when we trust in other things outside of God. People have different levels of commitment to being faithful, and appearances can be deceptive. Well done, a perfectly manicured and posted minute poem, perfect in detail, good luck, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    True . Thank you very much.

reply by royowen on 11-Dec-2019
    Welcome
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Your well-written, very emotional minute poem movingly describes what love can do--take us to the heights of happiness or plunge us to the depths of heartbreak.


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much.
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country ranch writer
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A good thing gone wrong some where along the line. Ending up with one becoming trashed over the sad results of a once good relationship. Just saying.


 Comment Written 09-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much.
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This is a wonderful contest entry for the Minute poem. A lot of relationships start out with passion and feeling replete, as stated in the poem. The picture is very intense and adds to the mood of the poem. Great job


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much.
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I think this is a good entry for the Minute writing prompt.
Your verse tells of lust and love abating.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much.
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Very well written and great choice of artwork by the "the master", Cleo.
The overall effect is quite eye-catching and your words are profound and where often humans go. I personally have been there in the past and thank God the trash was cleared away, but how painful when one experiences it and goes through it. I only regret I do not have a six left.
Great job with this.
Wendy


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much.I am glad that the trash had been carried away..
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You did a nice job with this entry. Your syllable count and rhyme scheme are perfect. You have a good theme that everyone can relate to. The passions of love that everyone longs for simply don't last. They almost always shift. We do feel trashed. It's one of life's terrible ups and downs.
Good luck with the committee.


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much.
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Very vivid and the picture works well too. Reminds me of the song "Electric Blue" for some reason. Not sure how I feel about the word chose of 'replete'. It almost feels like it doesn't fit with the rest of the piece and it makes me wonder 'should that be something else?' even though you are grammatically correct. Just something to be mindful of. I think this is a very nice and thoughtful minute and I wish you the best of luck in the competition!


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Actually you are right 'replete has a slight negative tone ,but it fits the rhyme scheme and i could not find any other...Thank you for noting that .It means you read with seriousness..

reply by __Lou__ on 11-Dec-2019
    No worries.
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This minute poem tells of the life of a failed romance from the first passion to its horrible endings in a broken heart.
Interesting art work.
Good luck and keep writing
Happy Holidays.
dragonpoet


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2019


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    Thank you very much.

reply by dragonpoet on 11-Dec-2019
    You are most kindly welcome.
    Joan
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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written minute poem. Many relationships start with passion and excitement but sometimes it suddenly falls apart for now the simplest reasons.


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2019


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Thank you very much.
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