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Mirror's message


Four line poem

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lauralumummu
 
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I like it a picture in a picture. For some reason, this reminds of my mom seeing herself in a mirror on a streetcar and wondering why some old lady was starring at her. She never saw herself as old. Great contest entry. All the best, Laura.


 Comment Written 12-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much for your review .I am sorry for the delay in reply .Happy new year and a have a peaceful year!
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jenintorre
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This is a very profound four line poem about a mirror. There is so much truth in this. It is my favourite.I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen


 Comment Written 12-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    THank you very much for your review and I am sorry for the delayed reply.
    Happy new year!
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Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like this. That's witty, clever, and well thought out to use a mirror to express a message about truth. I like it and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    I am sorry for the delayed reply .Thank you very much for your kind words and wishyou a very happyNew year .
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Bobby Jo
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Discovering who you are by tweaking your angels and discovering an altered perspective. Isn't that the truth. Thanks for sharing and have a great Christmas.


 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much .Wish you a very happy year ahead.
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Therese Caron
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I think this is a very good entry for the four line poem. contest. I often find it amazing how well people do when words and or syllables are limited. I think this poem can be taken two ways, at face value or representing looking inside yourself at what others see when they look at you.
Nice job!


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    I am sorry for the delayed reply .Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem .And may God bless you with a peaceful New Year.
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Oh yes indeed, a mirror can change the perspective and indeed the bible talks of the word of God being a mirror, to look at yourself in its reflection, a beautifully written four line poem, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    I am sorry for the delayed reply .Thank you very much and may God bless you with a happy and peaceful New Year.

reply by royowen on 06-Jan-2020
    That?s OK
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A very well-written four-line poem about the message we find in the mirror when we take the time to look what it reveals. We can see behind us without turning our heads.


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much .I am sorry for the delay in replying.
    may God bless you with a peaceful and happy New Year.
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Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Four Line Poem contest.
I'm not sure which is your altered view, the truth or the other.
But, I like this. Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    I am sorry for the delayed reply .Thank you very much and May God bless you with a happy and Peaceful New Year.
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This is a creative four line poem that deals with the perspective of a rearview mirror.
Interesting choice of words to "tweak my angles." Good luck in the contest and enjoy the season.
Bill


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much and I am sorry that my reply is delayed.
    A very happy and prosperous New Year to you
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Well done Sanku, my friend. I am sorry I have missed so much, I have been away actually for the most part. I wish you and yours a Happy Holiday season. God bless you. :) Bob


 Comment Written 10-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    Thank you Bob and I am sorry for the delay in reply. was going through a tough time because of the demise of a beloved person
    May God Bless you with a happy and peaceful New Year.

reply by Mastery on 06-Jan-2020
    Sorry to hear that. Bless you my friend. May God be with you. :) Bob
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