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Cracker Croakers #33 :

FanStory's Only Talk Show - Number 33: Christmas Tree Tips

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You've included some very useful information here about choosing and caring for a Christmas tree. The sugar water idea is a good one.


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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this post. Appreciate the review.
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I liked this script Brett, I can't remember when I last saw a real Christmas tree here, they tend to be the artificial generic ones that are frequented now. Well done Brett, this is an excellent script, and a really good post, well done, blessings, Roy


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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Appreciate the review.

reply by royowen on 15-Dec-2019
    Most welcome
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Hi Brett. That is a gorgeous tree and the blue color is outstanding. This is an informative piece on the care of a real Christmas tree. So many people are going to artificial ones, I'm surprised there are tee farms still in existence. You've asked some good questions. Thanks for sharing the tips ~ although my tree is store bought. Marilyn


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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Appreciate the review.
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Hi Brett, so now we've learned a great deal about keeping our Christmas tree as fresh as possible for the longest time. Very informative script. Well written, and I'm looking forward to what's next. All best. Ulla:))


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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Appreciate the review.
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Very well done for this segment Christmas trees for Christmas and choosing the right tree is important. I used to buy mine late so it would last through the holidays. I love Douglas fir. Trees this year are over a hundred dollars I just can't believe it!


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    Smiles
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This was an interesting story. An insight to the selection, placing and care of Christmas trees. Good work and no spags.


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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
    Appreciate the review. Trying to finish in the Top 5 Script writers for the year. At the beginning of 2019, I knew very little about writing scripts, so achieving that goal would be nice.
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This script, Cracker Croakers #33, provides a swell dialogue for the host and the tree expert to relay the important Christmas tree information. Nice.


 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Appreciate the review.
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This adheres to script formatting nicely. The content offers some informative and timely tips to keep a Christmas tree happy through the holidays. The sugar water bit seems lots of work especially when all you need do is add a 20 ounce bottle of 7UP or Sprite to the water each time you freshen it. I would suggest you go through this carefully again as it is sprinkled with SPAG (example below):
"JEREMY SUTTON: Christmas trees can absorb as much of a gallon of water every day, and that water needs to be fresh." - This is just one example of the SPAG scattered throughout which I found to be distracting. This should be: Christmas trees can absorb as much as a gallon of fresh water every day.
Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 11-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 11-Dec-2019
    Appreciate the catch on "as" for "of".
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I think this is a fun and informative script from Cracker Croakers.
Also timely, with Christmas just around the corner.
Well done and Merry Christmas to you.
Sharon


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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Appreciate the review.
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The name Colton reminds me of the last bachelor on ABC. Great name for this scneario.
I found your writing to be nothing short of excellent.
I couldn't find any errors, and your paragraphs ran smoothly throughout.
Nice job on this one.


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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Appreciate the review.

reply by LeannaP on 13-Dec-2019
    Your welcome. Keep the great writing coming!
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