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Head vs Heart


When the heart falls, the head doesn't stand a chance

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Liz O'Neill
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This is so funny. I love the proverbial head & heart war. One therapist told us an interesting fact. To simplify, there are 3 parts of the brain. The top is the reasoning part (the head) the middle is the impulsive part (heart) and the 3rd is the do it automatically part. This especially is obvious with addictions. We make all of these resolves, "no, I'm not going to take any cookies." Without even realizing it, because we remember how yummy they are we thoughtlessly grab a handful of cookies. Well planned out.


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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
    Thanks for the interesting comments. I didn't know about the three parts of the brain but it makes sense.
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I love this heart vs head script. Good lines put forth for the argument of each one. You say you wrote this in a desperate hurry, but one would never know that. Great job. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn


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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
    Thanks very much for the kind words. Sometimes, the closing times for these competitions creep up on me.
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I think this is a good entry for the Oh Not Again writing prompt.
Your conversation between the heart and head is nicely done.
I wish you well in the contest.
Sharon


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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
    Thanks very much for the kind words.
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HAHAHAHA! Oh, what truth in this little story -- far too often 'Heart' falls for the outer package, but as your tale tells us, it seldom is a lasting thing -- 'Heart' being as fickle as it is when appearance dominates.

This was a fun read. Best of luck in the contest.


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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
    Thanks very much for the kind words. Yes, heart and head battle it out from time to time. Have a great day.

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 14-Dec-2019
    You're very welcome.
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This is so cleverly written and fun too. I really enjoyed reading it and think that you did a fabulous job with the dialogue between Head and Heart... very witty!!

Melissa


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    Thanks very much for the complimentary review. I'm really pleased you enjoyed it.
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I loved the battle between the Head and the Heart.

The number of times in lave was cute. I think junior-high boys fall in love with every new number one song!

"I don't think the blond hair is her 'true colour'. A great line!

Well done!


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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
    Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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I found this to be interestimg. Even though written in a hurry, it plays a significant role in the contest.
I liked the line about revealing she was the one.
Much luck to you


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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
    Thanks very much for the kind words. I'm pleased you found it interesting.
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This short story romance posting, Head vs Heart, is a funny dialogue that we probably have all had with ourselves. Heart typically wins at first, but head has the last word.


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    Thanks for taking the time to read this. Head and heart can certainly have some big battles.
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The battle between heart and head in our search for love and we often listen to our heart when the head is trying to keep it in check. The heart wins and often the head suffers the heartache, an unusual write, love Dolly x


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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
    Thanks very much, Dolly, for the kind words.
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I love your humorous story that can be all too true at times. A great entry for the contest. Very well written and an interesting theme. Good luck in the contest, Laura.


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    Thanks for taking the time to read this. I appreciate it.
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