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Some needed uplifting

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Jay, This is a very sweet and very well written poem you have penned full of great words of encouragement to help uplift others. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this my friend. I hope you are having a Merry Christmas my friend. May God bless you! Teri


 Comment Written 25-Dec-2019


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We all seem to know what is needed but we don't act on our
knowledge too often. Yes our leaders aren't being good
role models right now.
Merry Christmas
Joan


 Comment Written 24-Dec-2019


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I think it starts not necessarily from the leaders, in my view they appear to be just as lost as the general populace, it does exist, I stopped drinking, smoking and gambling when God told me to stop, it's a terrifying thing not knowing what comes after death, nothingness, judgement or redemption? Nobody has come back to say, only one...Jesus Christ. Beautifully written, change starts with oneself, nobody else. Blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 24-Dec-2019


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Excellent poem friend, Jay. I think it's just too crowded and noisy right now to hear the voice of reason.

That said, there is never any time to noisy or busy to show kindness and empathy. Compassion seems a rare gem and sadly, we can no longer look to our leaders to make the call.

Merry Christmas to you and so many thanks for sharing all your fine poetry this year. Some from years ago and some written this year.

Your gift to us is very much appreciated. :)

Gloria


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Dear Jay,
This really resonates with the current situation in all countries at present. I suppose it might be much worse in the dictatorships, but even in our so-called democracies, the leaders are so out of touch. An excellent write.
Merry Xmas
Reg


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it is always a pleasant to hear the wisdom of man speak. may life continue on the road path of enlightenment and wisdom for you. your poem was well said and told. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer


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Thank you, Jay. A Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you, as well. You are near the same age age my mother would be if she were still alive. She would be 97 this year. A poem reflecting your years of accumulated wisdom.

I'm glad to see you writing and enjoy your work.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2019


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-I enjoy your poetry, and
this one is no exception.
-You write so smoothly
with effective imagery and rhyme,
while also giving us
very good 'food for thougt.'
-I like the idea of honesty
in our yesterdays.
-We all need "compassion's care.
-Have a very Merry Christmas
and a very good New Year, jaybird.


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2019


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Sharing and caring does lighten life's loads. And we all need a little tea and sympathy at times. When we perform small acts of kindness, it makes the world that much more loving. Thank you for your encouraging words.


 Comment Written 23-Dec-2019


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95 and still writing poetry like this. It is so rich in wisdom. Jaybird I wish you all the blessings Christmas has to offer. And I hope I'm here in five years time to wish you a happy 100th.


 Comment Written 22-Dec-2019


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