Hello Jaybird, another fine poem from you and a very worthy one. I agree on the importance of the attributes you list here, in good abab rhyme and perfect meter. Yes, teachers and leaders could do well to encourage these.
A lovely piece of work. Warm regards Dorothy - and Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Hi, this is a beautiful piece of work. Fantastic and I liked the presentation and the beautiful stanzas. You have good English command and I wish to join you in search of these virtues. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others.
Stanza one sets the scene reminding us of what we are in danger of losing 'morality' and 'honesty'- how are such values going to be reinstated now that they are being eroded - thanks for sharing this powerful message from your wisdom gleaned along life's path
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