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Some needed uplifting

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I really enjoyed reading it and I couldn't agree with you more. You captured the essence of the season. Nicely done.


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Hello Jaybird, another fine poem from you and a very worthy one. I agree on the importance of the attributes you list here, in good abab rhyme and perfect meter. Yes, teachers and leaders could do well to encourage these.
A lovely piece of work. Warm regards Dorothy - and Merry Christmas to you and yours.


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This is a very impactive statement in this poem. There are so many qualities lost to newer generations. It is sad that many disregard human life itself as those it is not worthy of respect.

Thank you for sharing!
xoxo


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Hi, this is a beautiful piece of work. Fantastic and I liked the presentation and the beautiful stanzas. You have good English command and I wish to join you in search of these virtues. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others.


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Merry Christmas Jay, and thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Empathy, respect, sympathy, compassion used to be taught in schools, now the only think we see is the theory of me.


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Your poem is a delightful plea for all to support each other and for leaders to participate which we sorely lack these days. Your words flow freely, easily and rhymes well.


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While your comments describe a situation we would all like, I don't see it coming any time soon. Empathy has become a rare quality. I enjoyed reading your poem. Keep writing.

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Stanza one sets the scene reminding us of what we are in danger of losing 'morality' and 'honesty'- how are such values going to be reinstated now that they are being eroded - thanks for sharing this powerful message from your wisdom gleaned along life's path

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