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Out of sixes. Yes, I am sobbing on a VERY early Sat. morning, my sneak time onto the site. THIS is phenomenal. PHENOMENAL. Did I shout that loud enough? Oh Sally, you had better be getting something published or shall I say (something(s). I am in awe of your ability, especially with the long stuff. You are a notch above. I hope you are sending some of this out to publishers. I know that rejection may occur, but KEEP sending it. Anyone with a heart that takes the time to read your work, would have to see the beauty in it. Get busy girl! You are meant for more than FanSTory, although we do so love it, right?
Wendy
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2020 |
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
Probably out of sixes because I am loaded up! I accept all virtual sixes and sweet compliments. You are like liquid sunshine on a dismal day, dear Wemday. Thank you again for loving to read me.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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-This is so deserving of a sixth star, Sally.
-Emotion flows off of the page.
-I like how you are using the letter theme in this series.
-I also like how you use a line from it later
in the story, as Eleanor recalls Reggie's letter.
-The description of what Reggie went through
to get the letter to her was done very well, but was sad.
-Eleanor is a very astute woman, and puts her
plan in action after realizing she needed to find him.
-She went to great lengths, but her searching paid off.
-The idea of sharing muffins with the soldiers was very good,
and was a way to break the ice when she learned about Gerry.
-The scene between them is written very well, and is heartbreaking
when she goes out the door, but waits, and then hears his cries.
-The ending is bittersweet; they didn't have a lot of
time with one another, but she will have a life with their son.
-Well done!
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2020 |
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
Thank you for the lovely review and kindest compliments, dear Pam. Your reviews always mean the world to me. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Jan-2020
You are very welcome and deserving, Sally. The best is sent back to you, too!
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