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One Winter's Night


A storm came in...

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Comment by
Diana L Crawford
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Another deeply beautiful work. Especially relevant with winter setting in. It makes me think of my grandmother and how she might have fit this picture many a winter night after my grandfather passed! Thank you for touching places in the heart that many cannot reach! Happy New Year! xoxo


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Thank you dear Diana, for your thoughtful and perceptive thoughts
    and comments shared, and generous compliments and stars!
    Perhaps a lonely night home alone, so deep in loves memories,
    especially lost loved one, is a kind of 'right of passage' through
    such a dark time, and as it passes and becomes less consequential
    over time, and we are more nostalgic and sentimental about it.
    Thanks dear, hope you had a fabulous Christmas & New Year's!
    Loved, Ronni
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This has to be one of the very best I've ever read of yours.

It's full of heart, emotion...real.
Just wonderfully beautiful Miss Ronnie.

Happy New Year to you!!
Blessings...


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Hello dear Irish Rain!
    Lovely surprise to have you peek in dear! Thank you for your
    most thoughtful and truly introspective thoughts and comments,
    sincerely appreciated and New Year sentiments. Hope your
    New Year is as blessed and beautiful as you and your magnificent
    poetry have been to us all, especially me!
    Love, blessings always, Ronni

reply by Irish Rain on 02-Jan-2020
    It most certainly is...our lives will always be what we make them, right? I choose 'happy!'...Love, blessings and happiness to you!!!
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Y. M. Roger
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And most of those memories are quite unbidden...and simply dance and entertain until they aren't...and then the silence finds a loudness we thought we'd hoped for. Sigh. Such a beautiful offering, Ronni-- so raw and real and defining... I do hope you find a bit of 'noise' in the New Year, my lady, and that the sun peeks in the window of a new decade laced with unexpected smiles!! ;) :) Yvette

Day is done, duties and errands done --> Day is done, duties and errands run [suggestion only...please feel free to ignore]


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Hello dear Yvette,
    Thanks for your most uniquely perceptive and affirming thoughts
    and compliments on this dear! These incidental lonely, home alone
    times, especially regarding lost loved ones, are perhaps inevitable
    yet serve a purpose and passage beyond grief and sorrow, to more
    pleasurable and tranquil moments and memoirs.
    Thanks for the lovely Holiday wishes, truly have had a most
    wondrous Christmas Year's, and with that 'right kind of noise"
    too, attuned to that warming sun and heartful smiles. Wish
    the same for you too for your Xmas Holiday & spectacular New
    Year! Congrats on all the writing status positions you so
    deservingly have been noted on - 2 different category's wow!
    Toast and cheers to you dear!
    Blessings, best wishes always,
    Ronni


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I admired your enticing picture and dramatic title along with your rhymed quatrains. You conveyed the loneliness and loss of a loved one vividly. Here's to making new memories in 2020- Joan


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Hello Sunshine Gal!
    Thank you for your kind appreciations and encouraging New Year
    anticipations! May they multiply for you too! Hope you had
    a wonderful Holiday. Take care!

    Hugs, Ronni
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I leave my last six at your door, Ronni dear. This is just so sweet. I hear those voices once heard, but gone now. It makes the holidays more sacred, I think. At least, I have those dearest memories, and they comfort me.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for the new year,
Sally xo


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Thanks dear Sally!
    for your most thoughtful and empathetic comments and compliments
    on this one. As you say, after awhile, they are more comforting
    than when first experienced and kept in grateful, loving heart
    all the more treasured.
    Thanks for the lovely Holiday wishes dear, hope yours were
    fantastic celebrations with you and yours!
    Also, Congrats on the honored 2019 writers board...in about 3
    different category's I believe,( may be off one on this,) but all
    so well deserved dear! You are truly a 'winner' with your
    profound talent, energies and always stunning enlightenments!
    Toast and cheers to you!
    Love, blessings always, Ronni

reply by Sally Law on 02-Jan-2020
    You are most welcome, dear Ronni. It is always so good to see you. Happy New Year!!
    Sal xo
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I love the imagery conveyed here Ronni my friend, the whole content of the work still magnifies peace and warmth to me despite the fact that there are storms, safe and warm, beautifully written, a fine piece of workmanship and smithing, well done, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Thank you Roy, for the warm and affirming thoughts and comments
    on this, sincerely appreciated friend. Hope you had a terrific
    Holiday with all your family too.
    Blessings, Ronni

reply by royowen on 02-Jan-2020
    You too dear Ronni, bless you, Roy
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Janice Canerdy
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This is a excellent poem--vividly descriptive and very moving. The poem conveys a powerful message about how darkness and loneliness can
really take hold of us.


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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Thanks Janice, for your perfectly perceptive thoughts and
    comments on this, and sharing your kind appreciation.
    Hope you had a gorgeous Holiday! God Bless!
    Best always, Ronni
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