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Rolling Tides


Tides capture my interest

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RShipp
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You followed the haiku requirements of a poem.

Your picture was a perfect choice.

Your word choice was superb, I especially liked "grasp my wandering mind".

Best of luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 03-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    Thanks very much!
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Iza Deleanu
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Beautiful metaphor "Rolling tides manage
to grasp my wandering mind
opening my eyes" thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    Thanks for your lovely review!
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Darlene Franklin
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Grasp my wandering mind - great image! Keeping us focused on their constant and consistent movement - opening our eyes and hearts to wild beauty and peace and God's faithful nature.


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
    Thanks so much!

reply by Darlene Franklin on 05-Jan-2020
    You're welcome!
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Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in your moving ocean
poem. I don't get to see the ocean nearly as often as I'd like, but when I get the rare change, I am mesmerized!


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    I'm grateful for your nice review, thanks!
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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 ocean poem. The rolling tides always open our minds with thoughtful thoughts and opening our minds and eyes to forget all stressful and negative thoughts.


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Thanks so very very much!
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There is something very soothing about watching the waves roll in as the tides ebb and flow. The white noise stills the mind and gives one pause for reflection. A mood nicely caught in your poem.


 Comment Written 02-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    A very sweet review and I thank you so much.
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rspoet
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
about the mesmerizing effect the ocean and its tides can have.
I sometime ponder by the surf myself. Nicely done
Best wishes in the contest and for a great new year.
Robert


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much!
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David M. Miller
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Good poem. I like the comparison of the restless ocean to the restlessness one might experiences in their mind, and the longing for truth. Good symbolism and connection of ideas.


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thanks much, I appreciated your review!
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Beautifully penned throughout its set fixed syllable counted and desire of knowledge to know more about its eyes wide open. Well done. Blessings Tony


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thanks so much for your kind review.

reply by Alchera on 02-Jan-2020
    You are welcome!
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Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Ocean writing prompt.
This short verse tells of the rolling tides grasping the watchers attention.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Sharon very much!
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