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Higher Path To Richness


Rich in New Year

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Lulube
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a quick summary is Be the best person you can be and good things come your way. love the concept. Great descriptions. Nice presentation. Different style. Great advice.

lulube


 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Right you are dear one, glad you appreciated and shared so
    kindly. Hope all is well with you...
    Reason this is so late, when my Xmas visitors finally left, I came
    down with nasty case of flu...and really took its toll; and much
    longer to recover. Truly sorry for such long time past.
    God bless you, gratefully as always, Ronni

reply by Lulube on 16-Jan-2020
    I know t'is the time for colds and flu, Ive got it in my lungs, on anti-biotics.
    Glad you are up and running again and time between replies has no insult with me. I'm awfully tardy at times myself.

    lulube
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Jesse James Doty
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This is meaningful and well done. The repeated use of the word, "Rich" works well in this context. I love the title, line above the title, and the beautiful artwork. You make many valid points in this thought-provoking poem. I like how it is centered, it appears to ask to be. I like the alliteration in the line, "be broke, bored..." as well as, the use of the words, "heart" and "health," "family" and "friends." My favorite verse is the first one. I like the phrases which rhyme of, "just beaming in" and "worth the envied win." These are excellent choices for rhymes, and make meaningful issues to ponder. Well written and timely.
Take care, Jesse


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Dear Jesse,
    Thank you so very much for your time and sharing such a truly
    conscientious and introspective range of comments and compliments
    on this, I truly appreciate it. You aced it perfectly, and expressed
    all your positives and compliments most helpfully and inspiringly.
    So sorry for such a long delay in replying, when my Xmas visitors
    left, I came down with a really nasty case of the flue, took way
    longer to get back on track than ever before. I hope you do not
    ever get it, so many viruses out there now.
    Thanks again for your thoughtfulness and excellent review.
    Best wishes always, Ronni

reply by Jesse James Doty on 15-Jan-2020
    Hello Ronni.
    It's good to hear from you. I'm glad you liked my review and found it valuable. I'm so sorry you took ill, and am happy you recovered and are well again. No worries on the delay...things come up for all of us at times.
    Take care, Jesse
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What a wonderful offering for the New Year, my lady!! You whet our appetites with a bit of rhyme in the beginning and then a feast of what to pursue for the year's bounty -- love that approach! ;) And you are so right about the last part, for if we are consumed with such treasures, we can never be 'in want'! ;) Thanx for sharing, Lady Ronni - so good to see your shining face in the New Year! ;) Yvette


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I admired your selections of "the kinds of riches that are worth the envied win". Here's to "even more redeeming and fulfilling dreams" in 2020! Big cheers- Joan


 Comment Written 05-Jan-2020


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This is a wonderful poem ofmwjkch I have already taken to hear, dear Ronni. My mind was disturbed today and after I read this, I said, "be quiet and think on things that enrich."

I thank you for this wise words, and gem for my bookcase, Ronni dear.

Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for the new year,
Sally xo


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Thanks for the great comments, glad you found a moment
    of enriching pause and calming effect, and finding it bookcase
    worthy. You are awesome my dear. Appreciated more than
    I can ever fully express!
    Sorry for the extremely late reply, when my Xmas visitors
    finally left, I got bogged down with nasty flue bug! Took way
    longer to bounce back....hope you stay well and never get it.
    Gratefully and with blessings, Ronni
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Hello dear Ronni,

This is profoundly written my friend, about the riches one should seek. But the richest of all, is that of the spiritual nature. Because we are never more richer than having faith and in that faith He will provide the rest. Thank you for sharing God bless
August


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020


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So many today pass these riches by especially younger people. If only they could understand the beauty of your message for there are no greater gifts than those you describe! And I'm so happy to have a six left this late in the week to give!

xoxo


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Thank you dear, so right you are on this one, agree with you
    completely. Bless you for the extra star, sincerely appreciate it.
    So sorry for such late reply, when my Xmas visitors finally left,
    I came down with nasty flue bug! Really bogged me down!
    Hope you don't ever get it...take care dear!
    Gratefully as ever, Ronni

reply by Diana L Crawford on 15-Jan-2020
    no worry, ever! I hope you are feeling better now! nothing worse when holidays are over than to be sick! Ugh! xoxo
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You should have entered this into the 2020 vision contest as I reckon it would have been a winner, I have just read the entries. We strive to improve ourselves with the dawning of a New Year and have our dreams fulfilled, I loved your sentiments Ronni, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020


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Mary Kay Bonfante
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So beautifully worded! I like the way you begin with a lovely rhyme, and continue with the riches that are of greatest value in life. (I would add a few intangibles of my own, but you have a good start there!)
"Broke, bored and sleepless" are afflictions that many people suffer from today, but you have just given some answers to help keep them at bay. Your last three lines are quite original and it's certainly worth attaining unconventional riches in the pursuit of such dreams.
Your picture is magical, and it almost looks like a little stairway to Heaven.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your most perceptive, comprehensive and appreciative
    thoughts and comments shared. I am pleased you noted several
    key favorite expressions and presentation compliments. A most
    uplifting and helpful sharing of essentials and positive aspects.
    Sincere apologies for the much too delayed reply, after my
    Christmas visitors left, I came down with nasty flu bug! Really
    bogged me down. So many viruses out there now.
    Belated, but sincerely grateful,
    Ronni



reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 15-Jan-2020
    You're very welcome, Ronni, and it's never too late. I just got an icky cold out of nowhere -- bad timing for plans that we'd made -- oh, well! Your profile picture is very pretty. Good to hear back from you.
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