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Being alone is very hard

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Raffaelina Lowcock
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Congratulations on a lovely presentation. I've been there, done that and have the T-Shirt, as so many of us have. The saving grace is knowing that for some reason you are still here. Finding the reason makes it a little more energetic.


 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Thanks for the read and your comments. Appreciated.
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Darlene Franklin
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I'm like this cinquain, but the 4th line leaves me a little confused. Who's missing from the beach? The poet, or the companion? Great pic to go with the poem. Good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    It is the companion, but the reader is free to interpret as she wishes.
    Thanks for the read and comments.

reply by Darlene Franklin on 09-Jan-2020
    You're welcome, Harry T. -- Darlene
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This is a short and sweet poem with a simple yet touching message. The words are well chosen to express a single emotion and the picture is a fitting complement.


 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thanks much for the read and the feedback.
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Well done for winning this contest and these are fine words, there is much sadness in these words and I congratulate you on your win, a sensitive write, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your read and comments, very encouraging.
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Chrissy710
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Hi Harry, Congratulations on a lovely cinquain and a worthy winner. Soft words with depth in their meaning. I enjoyed this Cheers Christine


 Comment Written 08-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
    Thanks so much. I really appreciate the opportunities FanStory offers to test our skills.
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Marilyn Lou Berry
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I feel what you feel and what you want the reader to feel. Sad and empty is grief. But memories you also write about. The memories and now the alone-ness. Very well expressed and the beach footprints photo bring home the sentiment.


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much for your read and the honor of a six point rating. Very appreciated.
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BeasPeas
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Your Cinquain is is excellent. We don't know the reason for the loved one leaving--death or another situation, but the result is the same. A fine entry. Marilyn


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
    Thanks for the read and comment. I purposely wanted to leave the reason up to the reader.
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Wow, you told a touching story in so few words. Great entry for the Cinquain contest and a beautiful stand-alone work. I truly felt this one Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
    Thanks for your read and encouraging comment.
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RShipp
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I believe you have followed all the requirements of a cinquain.

My favorite phrase: "Once footprints together...Now tides erasing only mine" Heart-wrenching.

Best of luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
    Thanks for your read and taking the time to comment.
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zanya
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Yes the sense of loneliness following the end of a love story is very effectively conveyed in this short format of the Cinquain - a pic to illustrate beautifully

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 Comment Written 06-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your read and comments.
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