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Praveen J.
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I really enjoyed reading this. Well deserved prize in the contest. I still think we could do something better with that last line.....though not too many options that rhyme nicely with kisses. Perhaps Misses & Blisses.


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    Thank you. Marilyn
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What a fun and rhythmic answer to this prompt, Marilyn -- and though so good for pleasure, it certainly does its share of stinging! ;) Thanx so much for your unique answer!! ;) Yvette


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    Thank you, Yvette.
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Marilyn, This is a very well written poem you have penned about the tongue for the 20 and the letter T contest. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri


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    Hi Teri. Thank you for your review. :) Marilyn
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Good luck in the contest Marilyn, the picture was a great choice. I enjoyed the different aspects of taste that you hinted at as well as the different tongues represented. I also enjoyed your narrative notes, especially your caution. Very well done, this should be a winner.


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2020



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    Hi Alie. Thank you for your nice review. Hugs, Marilyn

reply by aryr on 08-Jan-2020
    most welcome Marilyn
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Marilyn this is great, I love it and think it will do very well in the competition. Such a well chosen picture of your namesake too. Were you named after her? Good luck. Jen.x


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    Hi Jen. She is gorgeous, I think. Thank you for your review. :) Marilyn
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What an awesome poem. I love the sexy picture and the style, it has a great flow. This is a cool contest!

Good luck in the contest!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2020



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    Hi Mike. Thank you so much for your super review and rating. Blessings back. Marilyn
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A very well-written twenty syllable poem about the tongue that can be used for good or bad and only we can control what is coming out of our mouth.


 Comment Written 07-Jan-2020



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    Thank you, Sandra. Marilyn
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You have made excellent use of the twenty syllables the prompt allows.
Through descriptive wording, you have conveyed a powerful message about the versatility of the tongue.


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2020



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    Hi Janice. Thank you for your review. Yes it is versatile. Even when we're not speaking the tongue is moving around doing something. Marilyn
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I relished your creative interpretation of the prompt and your informative notes. Your rhymes and use of alliteration add intensity to this special, 20-Syllable Poem. Best wishes in the contest- Joan


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
    Hi Joan. Thank you so much for your review of my poem. Marilyn
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This is a great contest entry, Marilyn. I enjoyed the great rhymes and unique topic. Your picture is fitting, too. Thanks for sharing and best wished. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Janny


 Comment Written 06-Jan-2020



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    Hi Janny. Thank you very much for your nice review. Marilyn
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