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Scene at an Estate Sale

one scene script with Pons and Ned

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Y. M. Roger
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LOL!! Okay, Bill, so you deserve a sixer because of all the wonderful 'word play' you've got in this one.... had to pause a couple of times and go back and re-read a line or two, but I thunk I got em all! ;) :) I'm sorry I'm out and I'm really sorry I'm so far beehind, but I'm trying to get caught up... lol! ;) Thanx for sharing our wonderful and lovable Ned and Pons... I think I'd like a trip back to 1969 as well! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 11-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Yvette. I think I'll have Ned dream the Nash is a time machine. Where to go?

reply by Y. M. Roger on 11-Jan-2020
    Seriously? To the moon, Bill!! :) You know, July 20th!! ;) :)
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Bill, This is a very cute and funny script you have penned. You used very cute words and very good imagery with your words too. Thanks for sharing and the laugh! Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Teri

reply by Teri7 on 09-Jan-2020
    you are so welcome!
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Whenever the air around here gets stuffy, I can count on old Ned to air out things and bring a breath of fresh air. I am never sad or downhearted when I know that I can read about Ned and his new way of looking at things, Trying to see the world through Ned's eyes is very refreshing.


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thank you, nomi. I feel the same way. Bill
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It's good to see Ned and Pons back in their normal bailiwick. I loved the Widow Gull sounding like little girl to Ned, and the Kitty behind me Saint Anne. Hilarious!


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Yvonne. Those guys!
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So the boys are back. Ned's misinterpretations are funny. Such as "kitty behind me, St. Anne." Maybe Ned needs his hearing checked. My husband had a Nash back in the day. It was an old one I believe he got from his grandmother's estate. Great work with his. I think you do better with these characters than some of the new ones you added on last year. judi


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Ned and Pons. I?d just write the two of them all day. Thanks, Judi, for the positive review. Bill

reply by judiverse on 09-Jan-2020
    You're very welcome. I believe you could write those scenes all day. judi
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Lol! Good use of wordplay here. I think Ned really believes that there is such a thing as a time machine. Perhaps going over that Widow Gull's possession is a step back into time.


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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thanks, lyenochka. I like these two together.
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There they are... my two favorite guys that you write... Ned and Pons! They're always good for a couple of good chuckles... lol Thanks for writing these guys! :)


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Susan
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Your script is very well-written, interesting. Your characters and their dialogue seems realistic. I love the bits of comedy. Thank god rotary phones are a thing of the past. Thanks for the laugh.


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thanks, MD, for the great review. Bill
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Jesse James Doty
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This is fun and very enjoyable to read. I had a few good chuckles, especially at the end. The ending is quite clever, tying up all the loose ends of this script together neatly. I like the funky dialogue between Ned and Pons. It makes it fun to follow along and see, where it will take me. I like the mention and subject of a Time Machine. This makes this dialogue more interesting for me, as I love this subject. I like the part about Widow Gull, how she chased Ned around with a frying pan, shouting "Kitty behind me Saint Anne!" Well written and an easy read. Thank you for the humous tale.
Take care, Jesse


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Thanks, Jesse, for the specific feedback. Bill

reply by Jesse James Doty on 09-Jan-2020
    You're very welcome, Bill.
    It was a pleasure to read and review your script. Have a great rest of your day.
    Jesse
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These two screwballs do have a strange sense of how things work. It would be fun to see them get that old Nash working. It would probably take someone with their expertise.


 Comment Written 09-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
    Will have to check that out.
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