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Teardrop


A human thing that can confuse

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Drew Delaney
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Very touching to see a small child simply knowing. Knowing that all is well with mom and dad. Or that she is cared for.
Congratulations in winning this contest.
Drew


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    Drew I am very grateful for your validation and glad wishes.
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Tina Crute
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What a beautiful creation of a senyru! It's
simplicity is beautifully illustrated with a child's joy. I like the reminder that tears are for joy, not always pain!
This made me smile:)
Tina


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Tina, I appreciate the kind comments and I am smiling back.

reply by Tina Crute on 13-Jan-2020
    It doesn't surprise me!
    Tina
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Sally Law
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Tears of joy are just gold drops from heaven, are they not? I love this photo from FanArt. It is just so sweet and crowns you short poem perfectly. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :))


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Back at you my good friend, enjoy the moments that make you smile!
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This 5-7-5, Teardrop, has the right set up and applauds with choked up sentiment the proof of life each child bears for thr future of mankind.


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Bill, thanks very much for the review and comments.
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Patty Palmer
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What a little sweetie! I'm sure she can easily bring teardrops just from knowing her. They grow so fast! You turn around and they're grown, Keep track of every memory because you'll want to remember everything.
Patty


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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Patty, it is so very true how time never stands still and the little ones loose that God-gift of innocence we are all born with.
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Aaqib Naeem
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In such few simple words, you managed to capture and successfully combine so many different emotion! This was really well written and no surprises that you won the contest! Congrats


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Thank you for the review and comments
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Iza Deleanu
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So delicate and beautiful - tears of joy shaped in the form of a drop of hope -simply knowing. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.


 Comment Written 12-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Iza, Thank you for the review and comments
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Susan Larson
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How paradoxical that tears will flow for opposite reasons. Maybe it's not a matter of good or bad, happiness or sadness, but merely the release of strong emotion pouring forth. Very thought provoking.


 Comment Written 12-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Thank you for the review and comments.
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evesayshi
 
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In my opinion, a lovely poem in its succinct and warmly inclusive message and in perfect compliance with the prompt in both verse and image - best wishes in the contest with sweet and simple bit of philosophy...


 Comment Written 12-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
    Eve, Thank you for the review and comments.

reply by evesayshi on 13-Jan-2020
    You're very welcome...Eve
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Dolly'sPoems
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We cry tears of joy and those are the tears I like best. Children feel comfort from knowing those around them can be trusted and that they are loved, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 12-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
    Thank you Dolly, have a great week, upcoming.
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