Surprise Me This is a flash fiction contest. Write a story that has a surprise ending. Since it is flash, the word count must be between 200 and 600 words. The ending can be funny, sad, shocking, etc. But the reader has to be surprised.
In my opinion, a lovely tribute to someone who appears to have been loved by all who knew her. I am certain these beautiful thoughts will ease the blow of her loss to her family, graciously rendered by one of her greatest fans...
what a lovely tribute to your friend--I expect that her family and friends were delighted to hear this poem at her funeral. You were obviously inspired by her, just as we who enjoy your poems and wit are inspired by you.
I liked how you personified this by telling about the interest she had in bowling. That made this much more easy to connect to. you also had some nice musical elements in the traditional rhymed quatrain format, nice echoing effects in the verse, an appropriate somber and respectful voice. estory