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In Memory Of Marietta


A very special lady

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Marietta sounds like she was a very nice old lady, and much missed. This is a lovely personal memorial to her. Hope she's still bowling up there in heaven!


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020


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This is a great tribute to a wonderful lady. I like the way this poem flowed and the structure and the way this poem is written. Great writing and thank you for sharing.


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Hello, I just was passing by and read the poem composed by a broken heart. Beautiful and very sad. Definitly your deep description of this beautiful lady can never be forgotten. Terry xoxo


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020


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Your lovely, touching poem describes the type of person the world needs a LOT more of--a person who really cares about others and sees everyone as special.


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Thank you for sharing your memorial to 90 plus-year-old Marietta. I felt I got to know her through your rhymed quatrains. Here's to the special "beacon" and her smiles. Warm regards- Joan


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In my opinion, a lovely tribute to someone who appears to have been loved by all who knew her. I am certain these beautiful thoughts will ease the blow of her loss to her family, graciously rendered by one of her greatest fans...


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020


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She sounds like a terrific and remarkable lady. So glad this was read at her funeral. I'm sure she touched many people and this is a wonderful tribute to a life well lived.

Blessings
Janet


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what a lovely tribute to your friend--I expect that her family and friends were delighted to hear this poem at her funeral. You were obviously inspired by her, just as we who enjoy your poems and wit are inspired by you.

All the Best!

Phil


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I liked how you personified this by telling about the interest she had in bowling. That made this much more easy to connect to. you also had some nice musical elements in the traditional rhymed quatrain format, nice echoing effects in the verse, an appropriate somber and respectful voice. estory


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This is a very beautiful and very special poem you have penned about a very special lady to so many. You used great descriptive heartfelt words my friend. Thanks for sharing with us! Blessings, Teri


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