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Wise words and he who hesitates is lost! We don't always grab opportunities and I liked your positive suggestion to 'put on your boots and run' much enjoyed, love Dolly x


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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Thank you, dear Dolly. Your kind review is always needed and appreciated.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
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I love the way you wrote this poem it is so well said and upbeat. I love the energy that radiates from this poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.


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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Dear sweet May, thank you. I appreciate your kind and encouraging reviews. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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Sally, This is a great three line poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery that went perfect with the words. Best wishes in the contest my friend. love and blessings, Teri


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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Teri dear. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
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This made me chuckle, Sally. It's so exuberant and upbeat.
The philosophy of the write is absolutely spot on. So many of us, myself included, allow chances to slip by because of our lackadaisical approach.

Good thing that door is always open, huh?

Perfect syllable count.

I'm debating with myself about the punctuation that would enhance that terrific one word start. Perhaps a question mark?
Something for you to ponder.

Best of luck in the contest.

Blessings Julia


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    You go girl! I took your great advice. I love the question mark after opportunities. It sets this apart. Thank you for the review and suggestion. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo

reply by juliaSjames on 14-Jan-2020
    Happy you liked the suggestion. Hope the Committee does too. ;-)

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Hooray!! Such a simple yet powerful offering, Lady Sal!! ;) I would only suggest replacing '~' with '...' as the '~' takes away from the aesthetics of the presentation.... just a blonde opinion (lol!!). Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette


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    Thank you, dear Yvette. I see we both have our boots on and are running. It's nice to be together. Sending you my best today as always
    Sal xoxo
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Oh, I like the exuberance and optimistic attitude you convey with this jump and run verse. Well done, sweet Sal, on a great entry for this prompt. Wishing you the best day ever!!

Melissa


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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    Thank you, dear Melissa. I'm glad you enjoyed this, and I was very happy when I found just the photo I had in mind.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this uplifting, delightful poem. I especially like to see five-syllable words in these short poems; you chose a very good one.

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    Thank you, dear Janice. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, specifically aimed at my girls here on FanStory. :)
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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Hi Sally, this is a very good Three line poem - very down to earth (no pun intended LOL). Written true to form. Good use of metaphor in line two. Great accompanying picture. Well done and Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    Thank you, dear Dorothy. I had hoped to motivate and encourage myself with this. I thought if I needed it, all my girls on FanStory would too. :)
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
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