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Viewing comments for Prologue "To See The Dark"

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Kinda wandering?
Dark...
Check....
Flashlight...
Double Check...
Treasure?
...
"To See The Dark"'
"Dribble Flash Fiction Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck Barbara with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024


 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Thank you, it was fun to do
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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello Barb your dribble flash fiction is short, but good. It is
amazing what you can say in few words.
I wonder what the boy saw in the Dark?
How did you do in the contest.
Gert


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    I never place but it is fun to try and it is free.LOL Thank you

reply by Gert sherwood on 15-Jan-2020
    You are welcome Barb
    Gert
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Barb, This is a very cute and well written dribble flash fiction story you have penned for the contest. You made sense with so few words. That is hard to do! Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    Thank you, I had to keep editing to get it right.
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Hahahaha. I don't think it works that way, but I guess he'll find out. This is very amusing, Barb, just what I needed this morning.

Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    Thank you, it was hard getting it into such a short piece
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Mike Stevens
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another fine shorter, Barb--and makes sense to me--but let me warn little Johnny that if he wants to see the dark, he'd better turn on the flashlight awfully quick. So far, I've never managed to turn it on fast enough!


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    LOL what a laugh and I loved this. Thank you
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LOL! Oh, Barb -- this one is priceless!! ;) If subsequent entries in your prose book are as witty in Dribble or Flash, you'll have a winner many times over! :) Thank you for that smile this morning -- so much like the real logic of children!! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    Absolutely right, it is the innocence that is precious. Thank you
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