"To See The Dark"'
"Dribble Flash Fiction Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck Barbara with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Barb, This is a very cute and well written dribble flash fiction story you have penned for the contest. You made sense with so few words. That is hard to do! Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
another fine shorter, Barb--and makes sense to me--but let me warn little Johnny that if he wants to see the dark, he'd better turn on the flashlight awfully quick. So far, I've never managed to turn it on fast enough!
LOL! Oh, Barb -- this one is priceless!! ;) If subsequent entries in your prose book are as witty in Dribble or Flash, you'll have a winner many times over! :) Thank you for that smile this morning -- so much like the real logic of children!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
Absolutely right, it is the innocence that is precious. Thank you